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I want to believe you,
but I'm scared I'll sink
sink, into your lies once again.
I want you back in my life,
to start all over with our dreams.
To share our love and happiness,
and forget about the past.
I want to believe you words,
those words that once caused me pain
and a river of tears in the rain.
Tell me that, all you say is true
that our love was never through.
I miss your touch.
Those kisses at night.
Your voice I love so much,
and how you said I was your light.
I want to believe
you'll be by my side.
"I'll never leave you again," you say
as you pull me closer your way. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 14 [informant] => bluestars [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Believe

Contributed by bluestars on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:23:11 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I don't know what to think
I want to believe you,
but I'm scared I'll sink
sink, into your lies once again.
I want you back in my life,
to start all over with our dreams.
To share our love and happiness,
and forget about the past.
I want to believe you words,
those words that once caused me pain
and a river of tears in the rain.
Tell me that, all you say is true
that our love was never through.
I miss your touch.
Those kisses at night.
Your voice I love so much,
and how you said I was your light.
I want to believe
you'll be by my side.
"I'll never leave you again," you say
as you pull me closer your way.

Copyright © bluestars ... [ 2006-07-09 01:23:11]
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Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:38:08 AM AEST
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"I want you back in my life,
to start all over with our dreams."

I understand that a lot and i'm sure many many others can relate to that.

Nice write!

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 03:38:31 AM AEST
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I can relate to this also, lovely poem xxx

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:10:11 AM AEST
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I have believed many times, and your poem tells it as it is. Life can be so complex, but we still make the same mistakes, for we are human. Really can relate to this. Good write. Sue x

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:04:05 PM AEST
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I like this in its simplicity, and had to smile because it reminded me of something I wrote once upon a time ago, and more specifically; the feelings I had back then, and just the world as I saw it at that time...So...to put it simply; I enjoyed this, not just because I could relate, but more so because of your honesty when writing this. Keep up the writes, and good luck in love!

Scorp.

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:48:24 PM AEST
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Hmm very interesting write

I want to believe you words,
those words that once caused me pain
and a river of tears in the rain.
Tell me that, all you say is true
that our love was never through.

it saids it all

good job

Re: Believe (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 01:30:25 PM AEST
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Very nice piece, I like the absence of a regular rhyme scheme, it seems to add to the honesty, whilst the few touches of end rhyme give the piece a slightly naive feel, which is also conveyed by your choice of words, very well written,

2sdyx

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