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[title] => ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
[time] => 2006-07-09 01:15:20
[hometext] => To a very special friend of mine...
[bodytext] => Whispered secrets travel under moonlit skies
Winter prowls amidst bare-limbed trees
Sparkling dew clings onto silk cob webs
The sun dawns through the emerald green
Fragile remnants lay tormented
Crystal prisms reflected from my tears
Desolation felt in such a lonely place
As yet I ponder upon the unforeseen
A jigsaw of lost fallen petals
Forgotten by their burning hue
I’m a dreamer in a deep reverie
Surviving on sacred memories of you
Beyond the sun dipped horizon
Where the oceans current retreat
A whispered message leaves my lips
To awake my love from an eternal sleep
By Sue Mina
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~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:15:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Whispered secrets travel under moonlit skies
Winter prowls amidst bare-limbed trees
Sparkling dew clings onto silk cob webs
The sun dawns through the emerald green
Fragile remnants lay tormented
Crystal prisms reflected from my tears
Desolation felt in such a lonely place
As yet I ponder upon the unforeseen
A jigsaw of lost fallen petals
Forgotten by their burning hue
I’m a dreamer in a deep reverie
Surviving on sacred memories of you
Beyond the sun dipped horizon
Where the oceans current retreat
A whispered message leaves my lips
To awake my love from an eternal sleep
By Sue Mina
Copyright ©
eternal_dreamer
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2006-07-09 01:15:20]
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 03:41:06 AM AEST
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| Beautiful words xx |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:02:03 AM AEST
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Whispered secrets, gently spoken,
Words so special, heart so open,
Lovely sentiment and a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Sue x
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 07:29:20 AM AEST
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so beautiful
Shari |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:51:40 PM AEST
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Painstaking to read, and I imagine, to write (let alone post) as well...Is this about your late friend?
*sigh* Why must such sorrows be necessary in life? I hope the writing helps you through the heartache Sue...Take Care.
Scorp. |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:09:55 PM AEST
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A most lovely write Sue.
Beautifully moving in so many ways- completely touching,
and yet so sad as well. I adore the imagery in here. Excellent post!
~Breezy
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 06:30:24 PM AEST
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what a awsome write
I am sure your friend will love this.
hugs |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:54:23 PM AEST
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really great, the entire thing is a masterpiece.
xXx
~kei |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by wizard on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 09:14:13 PM AEST
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what a great write sue! you have such a great way of expessing yourself...awesome write.
wiz |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 09:31:47 PM AEST
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very nice!
pen |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 11:39:12 PM AEST
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You my dear Susie is what I call "A Word Wizard" You weave a beautiful picture in your poems, no threads left undone............The wondrous images you placed in our Mind's Eye stay there forever.
I found this poem very interesting as I could relate spiritual meaning throughout.
Simply put it was amazement~!
Warm love
momconsue |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 01:44:41 AM AEST
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Wow, this is beautifull friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Who ever caught them shouod be very happy about now. |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by poet_in_waiting on
Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 07:54:23 AM AEST
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Thanks so much sue for this wonderfully discriptive piece .. very moving stuff
cheers
sean |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Faust on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 04:58:17 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. I absolutely love the imagery
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:48:15 PM AEST
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breathtaking.
i loved how you tie in the imagery to the emotion, how it flows so wonderfully.
great,great job! |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:06:28 AM AEST
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This is beautiful,
Den |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 09:34:30 PM AEST
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A stunning aray of deep personal emotions set to a back drop of tragedy, so beautiful even in it's darkest moments.
((((Sue))))
Ben |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 12:17:08 PM AEST
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wow
I'm speechless...
a masterful flow.
Encore Encore |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by mastersr16 on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 02:55:21 AM AEST
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| very nice, deep, lonely, yet full of joy at the end |
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Re: ~*Whispered Secrets Under Moonlit Skies*~
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 12:42:45 AM AEST
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Great imagery and emotion, rightfully placed under emotional poetry.
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