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Array ( [sid] => 122933 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What If? [time] => 2006-07-08 23:57:56 [hometext] => To my mom who passed away so suddenly.... [bodytext] => What if she was still here?
Still here right next to me.
Next to me- so very near
I wonder how it would be...

I still keep thinking I'll see her some day
I'm still thinking she'll reappear
Only that day becomes further & further away
And I'm forgetting what it was like to have her here.

It hurts to face reality and trust she's gone forever
And it hurts to think that I can't see her pretty face
I wonder if it makes her sad that we can't be together
Is she mad that she has now lost this life-long race?

Because I'm mad - mad that she left me
It hurts to know I wasn't her choice
I hope that all my pain she can see
I hope she can see that I should've been her choice

Sometimes I think it helps for me to just sit and cry
I love her so much that I hate her for this
Why was she the one to die
Because now she's the one I'll always miss

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 14 [informant] => k2kdesigner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

What If?

Contributed by k2kdesigner on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 11:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

What if she was still here?
Still here right next to me.
Next to me- so very near
I wonder how it would be...

I still keep thinking I'll see her some day
I'm still thinking she'll reappear
Only that day becomes further & further away
And I'm forgetting what it was like to have her here.

It hurts to face reality and trust she's gone forever
And it hurts to think that I can't see her pretty face
I wonder if it makes her sad that we can't be together
Is she mad that she has now lost this life-long race?

Because I'm mad - mad that she left me
It hurts to know I wasn't her choice
I hope that all my pain she can see
I hope she can see that I should've been her choice

Sometimes I think it helps for me to just sit and cry
I love her so much that I hate her for this
Why was she the one to die
Because now she's the one I'll always miss

Copyright © k2kdesigner ... [ 2006-07-08 23:57:56]
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Re: What If? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:44:00 AM AEST
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Im so so sorry for your loss, seems like you cared for your mom very much.

very strong emotional writing... and that is the best kind.

Re: What If? (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:45:23 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for the sudden loss of your Mother~ She'll always be with you in ur heart.
I pray for God to heal the hurt u feel in ur heart real soon.
hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: What If? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:47:14 PM AEST
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I hope if nothing else, this felt good to write, and while doing so (I hope) brought about some pleasant memories of her...I'm so sorry for your loss, and I can't begin to imagine what that's like. Keep up the writes, and in due time I hope the pain dulls, and the happy memories increase...Take Care.

Scorp.

Re: What If? (User Rating: 1 )
by evolon on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 04:00:21 PM AEST
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i still find myself wondering will i see her , i find my self angry at god the world and her for leaving me, i find my self so filled with emotion i cant breath drowning in tears, trust me i know its hard but what holds me strong is i know she wanted the best of me at all times!... so when i look out to see if i feel her i try my best to make her proud cus when we do come together i wanna face her tell her how much i missed her how ***** i am she left and tell her i kept going trying my best like she wished!..... great write

Re: What If? (User Rating: 1 )
by mama4lyf on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:25:39 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. I enjoyed it, and i even felt emotional reading it. Very deep.

Im very sorry for your losss.

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