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Array ( [sid] => 122915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Things that make me Smile [time] => 2006-07-08 14:36:37 [hometext] => These things make me smile. Sue :-) [bodytext] => Leafy lanes, Babbling brooks,
Cosy fires with ingle nooks,
Fresh mown grass, fields of wheat,
Daisies in abundance at my feet,

Still water streams, Oceans blue,
New born lambs, Morning dew,
Sweet birdsong, Sun shining bright,
Twinkling stars in the sky at night,

Childrens laughter,Golden sands,
Lovers walking hand in hand,
Bees a buzzing overhead,
The smell and taste of fresh baked bread,

Most of these are ours for free,
These beautiful things for us to see,
So drink in the beauty for a while,
And you will also wear a smile.

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Things that make me Smile

Contributed by jerseysue on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 02:36:37 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Leafy lanes, Babbling brooks,
Cosy fires with ingle nooks,
Fresh mown grass, fields of wheat,
Daisies in abundance at my feet,

Still water streams, Oceans blue,
New born lambs, Morning dew,
Sweet birdsong, Sun shining bright,
Twinkling stars in the sky at night,

Childrens laughter,Golden sands,
Lovers walking hand in hand,
Bees a buzzing overhead,
The smell and taste of fresh baked bread,

Most of these are ours for free,
These beautiful things for us to see,
So drink in the beauty for a while,
And you will also wear a smile.

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-07-08 14:36:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 02:50:18 PM AEST
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Yeah, me too. Simply beautifull.
a masterpeice.
luv, huggs. smiles,
emy

Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 05:59:25 PM AEST
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You just inspired me to smile, Sue, through every line of this magnificent write imagining your sweet "miner's daughter's" English accent. Good work and I'm still smiling.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 01:20:54 AM AEST
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Sue~
How can not one wear a smile after reading ur wonderful poetry my dear friend.
Childrens laughter,Golden sands,
Lovers walking hand in hand,
Bees a buzzing overhead,
The smell and taste of fresh baked bread,
The picture u paint in my head and the imagery cast sensational. It's a delightful experience to read ur wonderful poetry Sue~
Keep up the fantastic work~
hugs n prayers,
sue m

Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 02:43:59 AM AEST
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This poem made me smile too. :-) So, we can add that to the list. ;-)

Very lovely.

Thank you,

Tim

Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 03:05:35 AM AEST
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Amen, sister, wearing a big smile. Each and every thing you mentioned in your post I just adore, and a flood of images came to me with each descriptive phrase. Thanks for raising my spirits on this cold winter's night.

Spike

Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 05:16:46 AM AEST
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Sue,

Thanks for giving me a smile :-) :-) or two.

You have the gift of taking the reader on a

journey, Leaving us with with food for thought.

All these things are around us, Gods Creation.

sometimes we need to be reminded.

you have reminded us Sue thanks.

:-) :-) :-) :-) Doug.

Re: Things that make me Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 07:32:58 AM AEST
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And smile I must
For all the gifts the Creator
Has given us

Wonderfully bright write
Shari

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