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Array ( [sid] => 122906 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bliss [time] => 2006-07-08 10:18:37 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after my ex and I broke up, I was going through a hard time then...but things are better now. I've started another new chapter in my life. [bodytext] => No more pain,
No more tears.
Help me gain,
The strength to face all my fears.

Always feeling alone,
All of the time.
Walking around like a drone,
Nothing on my mind.

But on the same note,
Nothing will change.
I'm wishing for an antidote.
Does that sound strange?

What I'm wishing for,
Will change the way I feel.
I'm hurting down to the core,
Just waiting for that seal.

The seal that will fix everything,
So I won't feel like this.
So I will feel nothing.
So I can feel bliss. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Moonwalker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Bliss

Contributed by Moonwalker on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:18:37 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

No more pain,
No more tears.
Help me gain,
The strength to face all my fears.

Always feeling alone,
All of the time.
Walking around like a drone,
Nothing on my mind.

But on the same note,
Nothing will change.
I'm wishing for an antidote.
Does that sound strange?

What I'm wishing for,
Will change the way I feel.
I'm hurting down to the core,
Just waiting for that seal.

The seal that will fix everything,
So I won't feel like this.
So I will feel nothing.
So I can feel bliss.

Copyright © Moonwalker ... [ 2006-07-08 10:18:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 06:43:14 PM AEST
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nicely wriiten , and easily put. Hope to see some more poems soon.

Re: Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:15:13 PM AEST
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A very familiar tune to us all sadly...The first while is the worst, isn't it? It just seems like the pain will never go away. I was glad to read your author's note, and hear that all is right in your world again...Keep up the writes : )

Scorp.

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