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Array ( [sid] => 122900 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Smiling of the Moon [time] => 2006-07-08 02:40:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A transforming melody
Played amid the silent skies
Dedicated to our both- loving souls
All tuned emotion it does comprise

Lost in mesmerisation
Upon this romantic eve- tis subtly true
Delicate aspirations for freedom
My faith is rekindled by you

-The moon smiles at us tonight-
Sharing in our pleasure
Of what is justly right

Laid hand upon hand
Becoming one
With thou twisted soul
One being of infirmity and flesh
A renewed person as we caress and loll

Encompassing darkness
Is it the night reflection or a hungry entity?
Rush to dismiss all beginning of thought
As embraced we are- consuming my identity

-The moon smiles at us tonight-
Approving of our youthful joining
Basking us in light

Now our love proving
Your lips unrestrained and precious
Yet poised and intimately powerful
Lamenting kiss- defining and truly luscious

Succulent smell of your skin
A ravishing- surrender to you passionately
My heart it would not suffice
To spend with you an infinite eternity

A healing is what you are
Shielding me from fright
Yes, we are meant to be
- For look! The moon smiles at us tonight-
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 2 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Smiling of the Moon

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 02:40:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



A transforming melody
Played amid the silent skies
Dedicated to our both- loving souls
All tuned emotion it does comprise

Lost in mesmerisation
Upon this romantic eve- tis subtly true
Delicate aspirations for freedom
My faith is rekindled by you

-The moon smiles at us tonight-
Sharing in our pleasure
Of what is justly right

Laid hand upon hand
Becoming one
With thou twisted soul
One being of infirmity and flesh
A renewed person as we caress and loll

Encompassing darkness
Is it the night reflection or a hungry entity?
Rush to dismiss all beginning of thought
As embraced we are- consuming my identity

-The moon smiles at us tonight-
Approving of our youthful joining
Basking us in light

Now our love proving
Your lips unrestrained and precious
Yet poised and intimately powerful
Lamenting kiss- defining and truly luscious

Succulent smell of your skin
A ravishing- surrender to you passionately
My heart it would not suffice
To spend with you an infinite eternity

A healing is what you are
Shielding me from fright
Yes, we are meant to be
- For look! The moon smiles at us tonight-




Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2006-07-08 02:40:21]
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Re: Smiling of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 05:12:21 AM AEST
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This is absolutly beautifull.
It reminds me os a special nite in 1985 with a full moon.
good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Smiling of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 07:18:27 AM AEST
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awesome write punka rach!

wiz


Re: Smiling of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 07:43:22 AM AEST
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Rach~
Hey it's so good to see you posting again my friend. This is absolutely beautiful. The moon smiles at us tonight~ How breath taking . You have done a fine job with this write. Well done.
warm hugs,
sue m


Re: Smiling of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 08:31:49 AM AEST
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Wow poetry has a way of putting
things like the moon into words never thought possiable
and you did a wondeful job on this poem
very well written
Kepp on penning brother


Re: Smiling of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:29:09 PM AEST
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yeah~ ..deliscous persuassion of though girl.. (I can hardly focus here.. lol)
I also, have an affinity for the moon-
love the 5th..

audacious as always luv..

As always..

Billy


Re: Smiling of the Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 12:04:05 PM AEST
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Wow Rach---good to rediscover your work!! I see you are just as wonderfully descriptive and visual as ever! The passion is somehow persuasive in this piece...I really like it!




Scorp.




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