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Intro Spoken

Is It ok to dream and fantasize ?

As I imagine looking into your eyes

Feeling so close as I wish I could be

The beauty in you ,I can really see

1/
I dream of the first time that I hold your hand

The feeling, the flutter it makes me feel grand

The first time I hold you, I wish you were here

I can just close my eyes, I can see you so near.

chorus

I dream , Oh I dream

I dream of the first time we had

I dream, yes I dream

And when the dream ends I feel sad..

2/
When the dream ends ,And I am feeling so blue

I think to myself Why can"t my dreams come true

If only you felt you felt the same as I do

Until then I will keep dreaming ,You know I love you.

chorus

I dream Oh I dream

I dream of the first time we had

I dream, yes I dream

And when the dream ends I feel sad..

3/
One day maybe I will look into those eyes

And it would be so real ,not have to fantasize

They say dreams can sometimes come true

I wish mine would dear, I really LOVE you.

chorus

I dream Oh I dream

I dream of the first time we had

I dream, yes I dream

And when the dream ends I feel sad..

Hugs from Doug :-)
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SO I DREAM

Contributed by dougnut on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 12:50:52 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

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Intro Spoken

Is It ok to dream and fantasize ?

As I imagine looking into your eyes

Feeling so close as I wish I could be

The beauty in you ,I can really see

1/
I dream of the first time that I hold your hand

The feeling, the flutter it makes me feel grand

The first time I hold you, I wish you were here

I can just close my eyes, I can see you so near.

chorus

I dream , Oh I dream

I dream of the first time we had

I dream, yes I dream

And when the dream ends I feel sad..

2/
When the dream ends ,And I am feeling so blue

I think to myself Why can"t my dreams come true

If only you felt you felt the same as I do

Until then I will keep dreaming ,You know I love you.

chorus

I dream Oh I dream

I dream of the first time we had

I dream, yes I dream

And when the dream ends I feel sad..

3/
One day maybe I will look into those eyes

And it would be so real ,not have to fantasize

They say dreams can sometimes come true

I wish mine would dear, I really LOVE you.

chorus

I dream Oh I dream

I dream of the first time we had

I dream, yes I dream

And when the dream ends I feel sad..

Hugs from Doug :-)

Copyright © dougnut ... [ 2006-07-07 00:50:52]
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Re: SO I DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 03:17:37 AM AEST
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And so you dream and wish it could be,
Believe in yourself, to find answers you see,
Never say never, is my answer to you,
Wish hard enough, your dreams may come true.

Nice lyrics Doug, Take care. Sue x

Re: SO I DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 03:17:59 AM AEST
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I can play some and do read notes would love to be able to put words to music to notes and to play by ear, can do little but not much! This is beautiful and will make a lovely love song, it flows and leaves a warmth behind, I can almost hear the music in my mind!!

Michelle

Re: SO I DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 08:30:21 PM AEST
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So you can play by ear? Count yourself blessed. I could only play with the sheet music in front of me. Is a great gift to play by ear.
In this instance one hears the music of your dreamy song.
Nothing wrong with entertaining dreams, but man has even the power to make them reality, if not if he imagines it, but far beyond it.
Enjoyed this greatly Dough
Hugs
Elizabeth

Re: SO I DREAM (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 03:33:40 PM AEST
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Beautifully written...
Great write..
God Bless!

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