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Array ( [sid] => 122839 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect Girl [time] => 2006-07-06 17:44:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You are everything a man could want
You embody all that is good and none of what’s not
You exemplify the perfect form with a perfect face
You are unmatched and unparalleled amongst the human race
You remain forever in need with none of you going to waste
You give off a sense of sweetness with a delightful aftertaste
Your uniqueness sets you apart from the ordinary and common place

You are memorable in every facet with attractive assets
In every aspect you personify love with a hint of magic

You embrace your surroundings with open ended arms
You elaborate on the simplest display of spectacular charm

You bring me to my knees with a look that sends a chill through the trees
You bring me peace when needed relief occupies unease

As you pass, sleeping flowers begin an early bloom
As the scent of your hair is heightened by the hint of natural perfume
The mid summer air is cooled and aligned with the repositioned moon
You are a song for God and I pray to one day become your little tune


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_______ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mangos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Perfect Girl

Contributed by mangos on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 05:44:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You are everything a man could want
You embody all that is good and none of what’s not
You exemplify the perfect form with a perfect face
You are unmatched and unparalleled amongst the human race
You remain forever in need with none of you going to waste
You give off a sense of sweetness with a delightful aftertaste
Your uniqueness sets you apart from the ordinary and common place

You are memorable in every facet with attractive assets
In every aspect you personify love with a hint of magic

You embrace your surroundings with open ended arms
You elaborate on the simplest display of spectacular charm

You bring me to my knees with a look that sends a chill through the trees
You bring me peace when needed relief occupies unease

As you pass, sleeping flowers begin an early bloom
As the scent of your hair is heightened by the hint of natural perfume
The mid summer air is cooled and aligned with the repositioned moon
You are a song for God and I pray to one day become your little tune


_______________
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Copyright © mangos ... [ 2006-07-06 17:44:26]
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Re: The Perfect Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 05:51:29 PM AEST
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nice


Re: The Perfect Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 07:27:44 PM AEST
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nicely done!!

wiz


Re: The Perfect Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
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Lines 5 and 6 are almost simian..
..save the eloquent want and need of the rest~

Your longing is very evident.. and well spoken, thereafter. I've, now and again, felt the very same animalistic NEED!
(perhaps the title might've been: "You") ..lol
no kidding-

Good stuff-
..5 from me-
B




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