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Array ( [sid] => 122811 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take it, Twist it, Whatever Way You Want It [time] => 2006-07-06 00:35:55 [hometext] => my poetry=good, songs=:'(, song itself is reletively fast (this might be an actual song ((i'm in a band)) so tell me if it completely sucks, much appreciated) [bodytext] => From, what I say
At the end, of the day
The half-hearted goodbyes-
All the empty smiles,
Will be forgotten,
And we’ll all leave in shame

*insert cool guitar riff I made up here*

From, what I see
This won’t, be easy
My closest friends-
We’ll all make amends,
And leave,
Knowing we left happily

Good bye to all the tears and all the years, I thought I had with you
Good bye to all the ways you thought this would be, now you can’t have me
So sad, you’ll be deprived of all my love, but when push comes to shove: you don’t got it. You know you won’t have me

So if you don’t mind
I know I’ve done my time
You said you were happy
So now you can leave me
Just forget it
I’m yet another trick up your sleeve

To all, the words I
Said, without a smile
With the gravest of fears-
Throughout all of the years,
I’ve thought this over,
In my head for awhile

Now its ended,
This whole time, we pretended
This wasn’t a game-
We go our separate ways,
We were happy, with what we had; so we say:
Good bye to all the tears and all the years, I thought I had with you
Good bye to all the ways you thought this would be, now you can’t have me
So sad, you’ll be deprived of all my love, but when push comes to shove: you don’t got it. You know you won’t have me

We go our separate ways
Your happy with this
So we'll all leave in shame

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Take it, Twist it, Whatever Way You Want It

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 12:35:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



From, what I say
At the end, of the day
The half-hearted goodbyes-
All the empty smiles,
Will be forgotten,
And we’ll all leave in shame

*insert cool guitar riff I made up here*

From, what I see
This won’t, be easy
My closest friends-
We’ll all make amends,
And leave,
Knowing we left happily

Good bye to all the tears and all the years, I thought I had with you
Good bye to all the ways you thought this would be, now you can’t have me
So sad, you’ll be deprived of all my love, but when push comes to shove: you don’t got it. You know you won’t have me

So if you don’t mind
I know I’ve done my time
You said you were happy
So now you can leave me
Just forget it
I’m yet another trick up your sleeve

To all, the words I
Said, without a smile
With the gravest of fears-
Throughout all of the years,
I’ve thought this over,
In my head for awhile

Now its ended,
This whole time, we pretended
This wasn’t a game-
We go our separate ways,
We were happy, with what we had; so we say:
Good bye to all the tears and all the years, I thought I had with you
Good bye to all the ways you thought this would be, now you can’t have me
So sad, you’ll be deprived of all my love, but when push comes to shove: you don’t got it. You know you won’t have me

We go our separate ways
Your happy with this
So we'll all leave in shame





Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2006-07-06 00:35:55]
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Re: Take it, Twist it, Whatever Way You Want It (User Rating: 1 )
by MyNameIsJonas on Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 12:13:46 AM AEST
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This made me laugh:

*insert cool guitar riff I made up here*

Damn I wish I could write songs
But I have no idea where to start
Ill get it one day.

If this is a song
I guess its pretty long
Lyrics dont really matter
Unless people acutally read them
But its mostly on how you sing it >.>




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