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For the black dawn comes with much sorrow.
The night doesn't end with the morning sun.
for the black dawn rising has just begun.
Eyes grow dim at the fleeting light.
for the black dawn will come without a fight.
Some people fear when its time will come.
for the black dawn touches all, not just some

The black dawn utters a hundred silent screams.
It Differs from nightmares and dreams.
When the black dawn comes there is no way out.
You won't wake up screaming or have a voice to shout.
Men can't run away when the black dawn appears.
Fate is inevitable. It pulls stronger as the black dawn nears.
The black dawn gives only one path to use.
There is only forward, no one gets to choose.

I am no longer scared of the dawn that is black.
I know that fate chooses when to attack.
Why should I resist the place where I'm bound?
My spirit must go on when my body is in the ground.
But now, I watch every morning sunrise.
I enjoy the bright sun shining through my eyes.
For that morning dawn will one day be dark.
and a journey will await that I will soon embark.
Lifes final quest down fate's inevitable trail.
Down the dark tunnel under the black dawn's veil.
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The Black Dawn

Contributed by yackerz85 on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 04:28:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The booze he drinks like there is no tomorrow.
For the black dawn comes with much sorrow.
The night doesn't end with the morning sun.
for the black dawn rising has just begun.
Eyes grow dim at the fleeting light.
for the black dawn will come without a fight.
Some people fear when its time will come.
for the black dawn touches all, not just some

The black dawn utters a hundred silent screams.
It Differs from nightmares and dreams.
When the black dawn comes there is no way out.
You won't wake up screaming or have a voice to shout.
Men can't run away when the black dawn appears.
Fate is inevitable. It pulls stronger as the black dawn nears.
The black dawn gives only one path to use.
There is only forward, no one gets to choose.

I am no longer scared of the dawn that is black.
I know that fate chooses when to attack.
Why should I resist the place where I'm bound?
My spirit must go on when my body is in the ground.
But now, I watch every morning sunrise.
I enjoy the bright sun shining through my eyes.
For that morning dawn will one day be dark.
and a journey will await that I will soon embark.
Lifes final quest down fate's inevitable trail.
Down the dark tunnel under the black dawn's veil.




Copyright © yackerz85 ... [ 2006-07-05 16:28:02]
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Re: The Black Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 06:43:37 PM AEST
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nicely done!

wiz


Re: The Black Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 03:01:15 AM AEST
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We all have to make that journey its scary but your right we have to enjoy here and now.. Very good poem enjoyed reading it.. xx




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