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Array ( [sid] => 122730 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Rewinded [time] => 2006-07-04 14:51:53 [hometext] => No idea where the inspiration came from for this one...found it in my old poetry collection. [bodytext] => 6 seconds you're about to die,
Your life's flashing before your eyes,
Your heart's frozen as the time stands still,
The pain lowers and your blood dries.

6 minutes just before you die,
The light vanishes in the void,
Love is fragile, it starts to break,
All your virtues have been destroyed.

6 hours, you still have life,
But it fades to black and white,
It's too late to change your mind,
A decision too far from right. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 13 [informant] => cribby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Death Rewinded

Contributed by cribby on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 02:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



6 seconds you're about to die,
Your life's flashing before your eyes,
Your heart's frozen as the time stands still,
The pain lowers and your blood dries.

6 minutes just before you die,
The light vanishes in the void,
Love is fragile, it starts to break,
All your virtues have been destroyed.

6 hours, you still have life,
But it fades to black and white,
It's too late to change your mind,
A decision too far from right.




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Re: Death Rewinded (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 05:53:25 PM AEST
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I like the set up of how you done the poem. and I like the last line...suicide never the best decision...but i can see where people perform suicide tho.

Nats


Re: Death Rewinded (User Rating: 1 )
by vixdave on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:39:29 PM AEST
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Really good....Suicide is a stupid idea but I am sure most people think about it once in their life...Really like the way it all fits into place....kudos to you!




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