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Array ( [sid] => 122729 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beauty In The Breakdown [time] => 2006-07-04 14:45:05 [hometext] => Lets break it down shall we... [bodytext] => So there's this love,
A complex, yet beautiful love.
Trying to finds it way into a heart,
A heart unwilling to have it.
Find the beauty, we shall.

So lets, break it down.

They seem to love each other,
always smiling, huggins, kissing,
and holding hands wherever they are.

Although one is a couple years older,
nothing matters with the heart,
which knows no age.

Something unforseen has come about them,
but what is it really unforseen?

Although they said they loved each other,
they both knew they had to part when the time came,
which was to come so soon.

She would leave him, and go on with her life,
she had taken his heart with her.

But will she remember the heart she broke back home?

Now you ask, where is the beauty?

The beauty was written in the sky that night,
the night she left to go on with her life.

He saw it, but did she?
Of course she did.

Beauty is everywhere,
Even in the breakdown.
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Beauty In The Breakdown

Contributed by dj_justo on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 02:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

So there's this love,
A complex, yet beautiful love.
Trying to finds it way into a heart,
A heart unwilling to have it.
Find the beauty, we shall.

So lets, break it down.

They seem to love each other,
always smiling, huggins, kissing,
and holding hands wherever they are.

Although one is a couple years older,
nothing matters with the heart,
which knows no age.

Something unforseen has come about them,
but what is it really unforseen?

Although they said they loved each other,
they both knew they had to part when the time came,
which was to come so soon.

She would leave him, and go on with her life,
she had taken his heart with her.

But will she remember the heart she broke back home?

Now you ask, where is the beauty?

The beauty was written in the sky that night,
the night she left to go on with her life.

He saw it, but did she?
Of course she did.

Beauty is everywhere,
Even in the breakdown.

Copyright © dj_justo ... [ 2006-07-04 14:45:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Beauty In The Breakdown (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 04:04:53 PM AEST
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This was great. i really liked reading it.
keep up the good work.
cheers.
-Trini

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