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Array ( [sid] => 122717 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cigarette [time] => 2006-07-04 08:32:50 [hometext] => Hope you can get the message. -Trini [bodytext] =>

Love is just like a cigarette
Pick it up and drag
Take it in and throw it out
Keep some in your bag
Everybody’s watching you
Don’t be a ********** fool
Take another drag again
Because you’re ******* cool
Light you up
Get passed around
Suck you dry
Thrown on the ground
Crushed a little
To kill the spark
Left alone
Beside the park
Just like a cigarette
Is the message I can send
Love is just like a cigarette
It kills you in the end
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 338 [topic] => 43 [informant] => trini [notes] => Edited due to the use of banned words. Please read the site rules and star out the whole of the word in future. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Cigarette

Contributed by trini on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:32:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Love is just like a cigarette
Pick it up and drag
Take it in and throw it out
Keep some in your bag
Everybody’s watching you
Don’t be a ********** fool
Take another drag again
Because you’re ******* cool
Light you up
Get passed around
Suck you dry
Thrown on the ground
Crushed a little
To kill the spark
Left alone
Beside the park
Just like a cigarette
Is the message I can send
Love is just like a cigarette
It kills you in the end

Copyright Â© trini ... [ 2006-07-04 08:32:50]
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Re: Cigarette (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:41:00 AM AEST
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Nice poem, very true sentiment, but it seems that however much I am made aware of the dangers of both these things, my heart and lungs are still addicted to both!!!

2sdyx

Re: Cigarette (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:42:19 AM AEST
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well then.... i honestly like this poem alot and i understand where ur coming from with the message.... but... from self experience i have learned not to love just any1 and not to let just any1 love me. Walls r put up and never knocked down, anyways, this is a great poem and it sounds like u have a fear for love... only u can crack it... keep well ur a good writer!!!

savedbydeath
R*J
hugs & kisses

Re: Cigarette (User Rating: 1 )
by FlowerGrl on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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Good message.

Re: Cigarette (User Rating: 1 )
by Cayleigh-Chan on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 08:53:49 AM AEST
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I loved the rhyming in this.
It was great.
Automatic fav!

Great work.
~Cayleigh-chan

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