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and no one to trust
so before I bust
I have something to get off my chest

I see myself no more
than a magnificent bore
Trying to settle the score
of his own demons

Having no self esteem
Not able to dream
because it all seems
so futile

Knowing I need to lie
To think I am a good guy
Not wanting to look into the eye
of my own mind

Scared of what I will see
Scared of what I will be
Scared that I will never be free
of my own doubts

So now this will end
Because it really doesn't lend
itself to help me befriend
myself... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 43 [informant] => PoeticHybrid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Ranting

Contributed by PoeticHybrid on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

In love with my lust
and no one to trust
so before I bust
I have something to get off my chest

I see myself no more
than a magnificent bore
Trying to settle the score
of his own demons

Having no self esteem
Not able to dream
because it all seems
so futile

Knowing I need to lie
To think I am a good guy
Not wanting to look into the eye
of my own mind

Scared of what I will see
Scared of what I will be
Scared that I will never be free
of my own doubts

So now this will end
Because it really doesn't lend
itself to help me befriend
myself...

Copyright © PoeticHybrid ... [ 2006-07-04 03:57:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ranting (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 06:35:10 AM AEST
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Well this is a hybrid, manificent rant.
huggs, smiles,
emy
Please don't be so hard on yourself.
There's enuff mercy and grace for us all.

Re: Ranting (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 08:31:03 AM AEST
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Cool, I enjoyed reading it very much, wicked beat to it, like a heartbeat, meaning it must have heart... an essential aspect of all good poetry!

2sdyx

Re: Ranting (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 04:15:20 AM AEST
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Nice rhyming techique.. Not about to dream? You must be able to as your work is very thoughtful.
Another good write!

- Tim

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