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A simple Maiden is heard
Heart devoured and spit out
By a Knights unkindly word

Heart lies shattered on the ground
Broken beyond repair
Sorrowful songs on the wind
Fill the dense black air

She falls but not by her own hand
She slips on his cast off fears
As she falls she remembers him
And begs he forgets the years

That they laughed, sang and danced
All memories of her gone
Except on the night she died
Let him suffer all night long

Hark now angels hear her plea
The Maiden once joyous and true
Bring her to the promise land
Where skies are always blue

So many days this knight
Lived in ignorance
Except the night the maiden passed
And his feet began to dance

All night long he can not stop
As songs of her fill his head
This Knight who broke the Maiden’s heart
And left her to fall dead

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Maiden's Song

Contributed by NoSaint on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 06:48:39 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Wailing from high on towers ledge
A simple Maiden is heard
Heart devoured and spit out
By a Knights unkindly word

Heart lies shattered on the ground
Broken beyond repair
Sorrowful songs on the wind
Fill the dense black air

She falls but not by her own hand
She slips on his cast off fears
As she falls she remembers him
And begs he forgets the years

That they laughed, sang and danced
All memories of her gone
Except on the night she died
Let him suffer all night long

Hark now angels hear her plea
The Maiden once joyous and true
Bring her to the promise land
Where skies are always blue

So many days this knight
Lived in ignorance
Except the night the maiden passed
And his feet began to dance

All night long he can not stop
As songs of her fill his head
This Knight who broke the Maiden’s heart
And left her to fall dead

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2006-07-03 18:48:39]
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Re: Maiden's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 08:18:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful in its sadness Shari.
Yes its sad that the ones we love the most seem to be the ones who are taken forgranted until its over then it all comes again.

Michelle

Re: Maiden's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 08:39:59 PM AEST
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Shari~
A most tragic and sad ending to this fair maidens story. We don't realize what we have until we lose it. Very well written Shari~ well done my friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Maiden's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by godsangel2006 on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:07:50 PM AEST
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wow i am impress
very sad ending
i love it :P

Re: Maiden's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:25:36 PM AEST
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Shari, although this a sad write and put together very well, love seemed so much more pure in those days-unlike now-
I seem to be drawn to write love poems about those days

Re: Maiden's Song (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_in_waiting on Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 10:00:26 AM AEST
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ahhh sweet lady of shalot

if this is not about her it should be ...

excellent poem of response

cheers
sean

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