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[aid] => mick
[title] => My True Love
[time] => 2006-07-03 16:35:59
[hometext] => I'm only 14 so I'm unsure of how this will sound
[bodytext] => I've only me you one time, but ever since then you've been on my mind, some people search their whole lives for someone who is sweet and can make them laugh, but I've found you and it's like you're my other half, when I talk to you I have no pain, when I can't talk to you I feeel that I'm going to go insane, When I saw you it brightened my day, it's almost like I was speechless and had nothing to say, then we started talkin and I got to know you, and for you there's nothing I wouldn't do, I feel that you may become my true love, I also know that you were sent from Heaven up above, God knew what I was going through, and to heal the pain he sent me you, He knew that you're the person I was lookin for, and he knew that you held the key to my heart and only you could unlock the door, he realized when I needed you most, that's why he allowed us to get so close, he's been there guiding me through every step of life, that's why I believe his plans may be for me to become your wife, first of all I think we need to start a good relationship, one where we get back up whenever we fall and trip, It needs to be where everyone knows that we were meant to be together, and we have to know that we will love and cherish each other forever, so let's try to get together and make things work out from now until the end, and remember that you will always be my best friend.
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[informant] => Traci
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My True Love
Contributed by
Traci
on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 04:35:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've only me you one time, but ever since then you've been on my mind, some people search their whole lives for someone who is sweet and can make them laugh, but I've found you and it's like you're my other half, when I talk to you I have no pain, when I can't talk to you I feeel that I'm going to go insane, When I saw you it brightened my day, it's almost like I was speechless and had nothing to say, then we started talkin and I got to know you, and for you there's nothing I wouldn't do, I feel that you may become my true love, I also know that you were sent from Heaven up above, God knew what I was going through, and to heal the pain he sent me you, He knew that you're the person I was lookin for, and he knew that you held the key to my heart and only you could unlock the door, he realized when I needed you most, that's why he allowed us to get so close, he's been there guiding me through every step of life, that's why I believe his plans may be for me to become your wife, first of all I think we need to start a good relationship, one where we get back up whenever we fall and trip, It needs to be where everyone knows that we were meant to be together, and we have to know that we will love and cherish each other forever, so let's try to get together and make things work out from now until the end, and remember that you will always be my best friend.
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Traci
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Re: My True Love
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by wolf_tamer on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 07:08:46 PM AEST
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i honestly don't think anything really about age. age is just a number. i'm 16 right now. i've been with my boyfriend since i was 14. he's buying me a promise ring. so see age is just a number.
some advise though.... if you ever feel like you are not getting the attention you need. talk to him. make sure he understands. you don't ever want to do something that you will regret.
this is a very good write. i enjoyed reading it.
~wolf~ |
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Re: My True Love
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by godsangel2006 on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:06:35 PM AEST
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Its true it doesn't matter how old you are.
Most people thinks they fall in love at least 100 times before they really find there life mate.anyway good job on this |
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Re: My True Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:28:48 PM AEST
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| I think this turned out very well for you just being 14. keep writing |
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Re: My True Love
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by bluestars on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 12:46:50 AM AEST
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Nice job, i also started writing when i was 14 so you have a long way to go so keep up the good work.
Good luck with your guy.
Best wishes,
~*Eve*~ |
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