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Array ( [sid] => 122674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A problem shared, is a problem doubled [time] => 2006-07-03 10:28:41 [hometext] => dedicated to her who is standing by me in times of trouble xxxxx [bodytext] => i've opened scars i thought had healed,
help me defend,
i have no sheild,
watch my fingers bend and break,
as i hold on to my mental state,
never ask if i'm okay,
i'll just lie
no words to say,
don't ever want to let you down,
so walk away,
just turn around,
i'll never hold it against you if you leave,
like a python,
your life i'll squeeze
it'll never stop, it'll **** your head,
and like me
you'll end up dead
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A problem shared, is a problem doubled

Contributed by bigbadblinkybill on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:28:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i've opened scars i thought had healed,
help me defend,
i have no sheild,
watch my fingers bend and break,
as i hold on to my mental state,
never ask if i'm okay,
i'll just lie
no words to say,
don't ever want to let you down,
so walk away,
just turn around,
i'll never hold it against you if you leave,
like a python,
your life i'll squeeze
it'll never stop, it'll **** your head,
and like me
you'll end up dead

Copyright © bigbadblinkybill ... [ 2006-07-03 10:28:41]
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Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:30:14 AM AEST
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A poet after my own heart.I understand these scars.They never heal.They just hide for awhile.I hope they will hide again for you soon.

Brian

Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 11:37:18 AM AEST
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an understandable sentiment, and very nice poem, the flow of it works really well and it gets across your message perfectly, awesome,

2sdyx

Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled (User Rating: 1 )
by deadclown on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 03:10:07 PM AEST
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great poem. sounds all too familiar to me. These are the kind of words I should be dedicating to someone. If you are reading this(u know who ur) I am so sorry for dragging u through my own personal hell. Didn't mean for u to get involved like this. U don't deserve it.
Sorry

Re: A problem shared, is a problem doubled (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 04:26:47 PM AEST
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Good poetic ability. I dis-agree. The problem can be shared, and therefore, lessened for the agreeved.

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