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Love is the rose
Touch the rose
But do not bruise
It's beauty
Hold the rose
But do not crush
It's petals
But watch for
The thorns for
They hurt the most
I am a rose
Soft and fragile
beautiful and bold
I can wither
I can grow
I can be crushed
My emotions, the petals
My mind, the leaves
My body, the stem
Be gentle
But not soft
With my emotions
Be kind
But not gentle
With my mind
Be rough
But not brutal
With my body
My wit, the thorns
my life line

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fragile rose.........

Contributed by godsangel2006 on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 02:47:56 AM in AEST
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Love is the rose
Touch the rose
But do not bruise
It's beauty
Hold the rose
But do not crush
It's petals
But watch for
The thorns for
They hurt the most
I am a rose
Soft and fragile
beautiful and bold
I can wither
I can grow
I can be crushed
My emotions, the petals
My mind, the leaves
My body, the stem
Be gentle
But not soft
With my emotions
Be kind
But not gentle
With my mind
Be rough
But not brutal
With my body
My wit, the thorns
my life line

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Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 03:51:36 AM AEST
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Wonderfully put, the last two lines says alot about you.
Take care.

sadaddy

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 06:05:18 AM AEST
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Welcome.
Very beautifull write.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 10:08:45 AM AEST
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Such beauty within the rose itself and you have captured
that in this soft, gentle write.

Your comparisons to the rose are outstandingly
profound, but that last bit was incredibly insightful!
The thorns, protective of the fragility of the
flower, are indeed the life line ..

Excellent post!

~Breezy

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 02:12:31 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! This poem was spectacular! Roses at you feet.
I loved the anaolgy! Can see how it fits with you and I'm so glad you are here!
Warm love
consue

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 01:55:58 AM AEST
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i love this! i can see why you'd need a new account for this type of write!!

awesome write!!

wiz

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 08:45:58 PM AEST
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what a beautiful title and pic..
I love the work as well..

great piece-

B.

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 10:45:21 PM AEST
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My friend an outstanding and very well delivered masterpiece. The rose, delicate and fragile . Like a life line the thorns protect it. This write says alot about you. Well done K~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*suzie Q*~

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:28:04 PM AEST
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Incredible, godsangel2006! ! !

Re: fragile rose......... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 02:31:18 PM AEST
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This was absolutely more beautiful than even the freshest, fullest blooming rose. So full of expression of you and your "life line". Special compliments to ya.

wabl
KenMoore
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