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[sid] => 122522
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => I miss you when...
[time] => 2006-06-29 19:14:15
[hometext] => a rewrite of an older poem of mine. I added some lines
[bodytext] => I miss you when I awake, every day, every... single... day... I know your better off. Because you let me I would never be what you’re looking for. I only hope that he treasures you I hope that he obsesses over you I hope that he values you... the way I have...the way I do… And I know that I’m not; handsome enough to catch your eye funny enough to make you laugh or talented enough to entertain you... so I tried... harder than any man ever will for you... I know I could’ve done so much more To simply let you know I cared I tried so hard… Everyday to do everything for you but I failed... apparently... I didn’t focus on the right things… The things that mattered to you… the only thing I ever achieved, was to make myself completely yours. I gave to you everything, as much as I had and you only wanted more... so I tried harder and harder... I gave you all but once you realized, that you had all of me... there was no challenge, so you got bored. I failed you and you left… I hate myself for all the tears I hate myself for the bad years I hate myself for what I put you through… And I’m only sorry for one thing... I’m only sorry that I couldn’t grow to be what you needed me to be, to make you stay in love with me... I miss you when my heart beats I miss you when I breathe I miss you when I close my eyes I miss you why'd you leave.... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 389 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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