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Array ( [sid] => 122495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HELL RESERVED FOR ME [time] => 2006-06-29 09:24:38 [hometext] => stay pure, do not let evil control you. [bodytext] => malice
hate
spite
Vengeance
Jealousy
And evil.
they have devoured my conscience
the lies control me
I have become a puppet
and I fall from earth
I feel the fire
hell has claimed my soul
the pain is unbearable
but I can't die anymore
death can't save me now
the devil himself looks down on me
seeing the tears that flow from my eyes
it's almost as if he pities me
I know he does not
it's my fault
all of it
and I am punished
the flesh burned from my body
slowly eaten by the inferno. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 400 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Forgotten_soul [notes] =>
|||Edited for spelling, as requested. - Moderator_14||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

HELL RESERVED FOR ME

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 09:24:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

malice
hate
spite
Vengeance
Jealousy
And evil.
they have devoured my conscience
the lies control me
I have become a puppet
and I fall from earth
I feel the fire
hell has claimed my soul
the pain is unbearable
but I can't die anymore
death can't save me now
the devil himself looks down on me
seeing the tears that flow from my eyes
it's almost as if he pities me
I know he does not
it's my fault
all of it
and I am punished
the flesh burned from my body
slowly eaten by the inferno.

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2006-06-29 09:24:38]
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Re: HELL RESERVED FOR ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 02:03:50 PM AEST
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Nice! Dark, but nice. I mean, you can always save yourself--with help. Good jod.
God Bless~~~

Re: HELL RESERVED FOR ME (User Rating: 1 )
by -why_not_let_me_live- on Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 08:01:29 AM AEST
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Im sorry it took me so long to read this, i couldnt work out how to get to it but i did finally today, this is really great, its good how you can put your feelings in to words i like it a lot
xoxox

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