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Array ( [sid] => 122375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love test test love..........=is it real [time] => 2006-06-27 10:31:05 [hometext] => 9987562 2213579 6654321 love [bodytext] => 9987562
2213579
6654321
love

will you come with me
to a place of open space
and being with you
will always surrender....my love

so with this opened prize
i give you my life
with all the joy
of being this way....forever in love

and on one knee
i pledge my love
forever more
until we die....and meet again

now we settle
in a house of love
and joy surrounds us
while happiness takes effect....as i look in your eyes

but then the time came
when reality crashed down
and i find myself waiting
in an empty house....thinking what has happened

i feel deep chills
race up my spine
when i get a call
on this darkest night....of my life

hospital ten miles
the sign read
as i push the gas
and go go go....to see my wife

but it started to rain
and the fog settled in
as thick as can be
so now i can't see....but still i will come

the fog was too thick
and the roads were wet
i slid off the road
and flipped to my death....i have failed

the doctor comes in
and tells my wife
that the cancer is gone
and she can go home....but no one is there

my wife goes home
and sees i'm not there
and calls up a friend
but the friend is a man....she is having an affair

...........figures.............

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 24 [informant] => diablohate [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested, - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

love test test love..........=is it real

Contributed by diablohate on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:31:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

9987562
2213579
6654321
love

will you come with me
to a place of open space
and being with you
will always surrender....my love

so with this opened prize
i give you my life
with all the joy
of being this way....forever in love

and on one knee
i pledge my love
forever more
until we die....and meet again

now we settle
in a house of love
and joy surrounds us
while happiness takes effect....as i look in your eyes

but then the time came
when reality crashed down
and i find myself waiting
in an empty house....thinking what has happened

i feel deep chills
race up my spine
when i get a call
on this darkest night....of my life

hospital ten miles
the sign read
as i push the gas
and go go go....to see my wife

but it started to rain
and the fog settled in
as thick as can be
so now i can't see....but still i will come

the fog was too thick
and the roads were wet
i slid off the road
and flipped to my death....i have failed

the doctor comes in
and tells my wife
that the cancer is gone
and she can go home....but no one is there

my wife goes home
and sees i'm not there
and calls up a friend
but the friend is a man....she is having an affair

...........figures.............

Copyright © diablohate ... [ 2006-06-27 10:31:05]
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