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Array ( [sid] => 122366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => silent pain [time] => 2006-06-27 06:43:44 [hometext] => I recently lost one of my close mates as he was suffering from depression i dedicate this poem to him may he rest in peice R.I.P [bodytext] => You scream in silence
a riot penetrating through your mind
waiting for a sign to refrain your affliction
absently diving into another world of pain
you hope to find that place you can leave your hurt behind
keep the insecuritys of your past locked away from pitying eyes
simply breathing dosen't seem so easy anymore
living and life are words that just no longer have meaning
happiness is an emotion far from here
is it more desirable to be numb and not feel anything at all
is it better to feel all your pain at once so you realise this is your awakened reality
the reality of your heart fighting its own battle
trying to beat while it just keeps breaking
your own body and mind breaking with the full force of truth
that the lonliest path is the one of depression
alone but crowded by your own sullen thoughts
critically ignorant to the one way leading to hope [comments] => 1 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 32 [informant] => suz10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
silent pain

Contributed by suz10 on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 06:43:44 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



You scream in silence
a riot penetrating through your mind
waiting for a sign to refrain your affliction
absently diving into another world of pain
you hope to find that place you can leave your hurt behind
keep the insecuritys of your past locked away from pitying eyes
simply breathing dosen't seem so easy anymore
living and life are words that just no longer have meaning
happiness is an emotion far from here
is it more desirable to be numb and not feel anything at all
is it better to feel all your pain at once so you realise this is your awakened reality
the reality of your heart fighting its own battle
trying to beat while it just keeps breaking
your own body and mind breaking with the full force of truth
that the lonliest path is the one of depression
alone but crowded by your own sullen thoughts
critically ignorant to the one way leading to hope




Copyright © suz10 ... [ 2006-06-27 06:43:44]
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Re: silent pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Anesthetic on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:48:38 PM AEST
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*first coment jig* sorry for your loss, this was a beautiful write keep it up.




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