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They show no courtesy and are unpleasant to interact with. All alone, in a sea of creatures floating on the foam, the wasteful excess in terms of all that is distinguished and classified as potent, the words thought up of are brilliant, have been lamented, proven hurtful and were said out of resentment. The meeting was scheduled to take place on a day all attendants were unavailable to proctor the proceedings. The postponement was inevitable as all the schedules were crafted in malicious ways. With a series of dots, connected are all the angles, the corner captive, the center angry.
The progress has been minimal due to a smooth transition from deceit to implicit denial. When abstract occurrences are smoothed into sensible events then reasonable expectations to overcome the sickness infects and resonates throughout the entire mind. There is no better time, then this, instance. To reconcile these differences, these demons, which disallow for normalized relationships, with others of various species, from all reaches, all shores, inland, to the coast flaunting sandy beaches.
The crime perpetrated upon me is indefensible. My actions, as a cause and effect, are in a sense, a systematic breakdown of consequence, in the thinking of a young boy with no where else to turn but in his own head, but in his own bed, he sleeps afraid of the dark and the dreams that wait to creep in when he closes his eyes to die for a night.

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I Dont Wanna’ Die A Virgin

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 06:32:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I experience dismal solitude amongst an array of people.
They show no courtesy and are unpleasant to interact with. All alone, in a sea of creatures floating on the foam, the wasteful excess in terms of all that is distinguished and classified as potent, the words thought up of are brilliant, have been lamented, proven hurtful and were said out of resentment. The meeting was scheduled to take place on a day all attendants were unavailable to proctor the proceedings. The postponement was inevitable as all the schedules were crafted in malicious ways. With a series of dots, connected are all the angles, the corner captive, the center angry.
The progress has been minimal due to a smooth transition from deceit to implicit denial. When abstract occurrences are smoothed into sensible events then reasonable expectations to overcome the sickness infects and resonates throughout the entire mind. There is no better time, then this, instance. To reconcile these differences, these demons, which disallow for normalized relationships, with others of various species, from all reaches, all shores, inland, to the coast flaunting sandy beaches.
The crime perpetrated upon me is indefensible. My actions, as a cause and effect, are in a sense, a systematic breakdown of consequence, in the thinking of a young boy with no where else to turn but in his own head, but in his own bed, he sleeps afraid of the dark and the dreams that wait to creep in when he closes his eyes to die for a night.

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Re: I Dont Wanna’ Die A Virgin (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 08:33:01 PM AEST
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excellent read, jyssvw!!

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Re: I Dont Wanna’ Die A Virgin (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 10:41:43 PM AEST
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What, an EXXXXXXXXtradinary write. What words, that take the reader, to what is felt. And the title..........A *****
star for thee......



Hugs
Brew!~


Re: I Dont Wanna’ Die A Virgin (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:40:32 PM AEST
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This was brilliantly written and the use of english was amazing. Well done. -Roxanne


Re: I Dont Wanna’ Die A Virgin (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 09:29:46 PM AEST
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freakin' liquid soul.. these words-
I could hardly breath from L12 till the close-
though as always, the entire work was brutally awesome~

#1 fan..

B.




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