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It's time for your divine uprise
You will stand alone
And strong knowing nothing
Will destroy your dignity
So let victory free the fetter
And put no trust
Into the world around you
Because when the time comes
You'll have to depend on yourself
So shine down brave mind
You're a soldier of a brutal kind
Your destination will follow
In the near footsteps to paradise
Utopia of the splendoured
Where you will rest your mind
Knowing nothing will step in your path
For freedom and youth
Keep walking forward audacious soul
In this perpetual parade
Of love and hate
Where you stand not enemy nor friend
But the mediator of time
Neverceasing for the fallen
And overcomming the loss of love
Die in paradise, my infernal side
Die with the cares of nothing
And the world will surrendor [comments] => 5 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Lucid_Tides [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:07:04 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Shine down valiant eyes
It's time for your divine uprise
You will stand alone
And strong knowing nothing
Will destroy your dignity
So let victory free the fetter
And put no trust
Into the world around you
Because when the time comes
You'll have to depend on yourself
So shine down brave mind
You're a soldier of a brutal kind
Your destination will follow
In the near footsteps to paradise
Utopia of the splendoured
Where you will rest your mind
Knowing nothing will step in your path
For freedom and youth
Keep walking forward audacious soul
In this perpetual parade
Of love and hate
Where you stand not enemy nor friend
But the mediator of time
Neverceasing for the fallen
And overcomming the loss of love
Die in paradise, my infernal side
Die with the cares of nothing
And the world will surrendor

Copyright © Lucid_Tides ... [ 2006-06-26 12:07:04]
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Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:42:18 PM AEST
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Excellent write..very impressive.

Jeff

Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 02:01:24 PM AEST
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Very impressive is right
another great piece of writing

Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by lilmom101 on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 04:48:53 PM AEST
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i like your poem so many nice words to describe all the things you talk about

Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:48:32 PM AEST
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Your writes are amazing. Most impressive and brilliantly penned every time. The more and more I read ur poems the more I get drawn in. You are very gifted and talented. Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Forward March to the Sea of Perpetual Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 08:00:47 PM AEST
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Very wonderful poem, it is done.. just waiting for Him to come get us..takes time for us from no time at all..

RaquelLeah

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