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Array ( [sid] => 122324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sometimes [time] => 2006-06-26 11:40:00 [hometext] => To My Father [bodytext] => Sometimes
My heart races
Then skips a beat
I cry for you
Knowing you will
Never hear me again

Sometimes
My mind rushes
To my childhood
Where your love
And firm hand
Gave me strength

Sometimes
My soul believes
Your loving presence
Surrounds me
Protects me
Guides me

Always
I will love you
Thank you
For all that you gave
And know
You are in my heart
Forever [comments] => 6 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 39 [informant] => leslie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Sometimes

Contributed by leslie on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Sometimes
My heart races
Then skips a beat
I cry for you
Knowing you will
Never hear me again

Sometimes
My mind rushes
To my childhood
Where your love
And firm hand
Gave me strength

Sometimes
My soul believes
Your loving presence
Surrounds me
Protects me
Guides me

Always
I will love you
Thank you
For all that you gave
And know
You are in my heart
Forever

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Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:44:45 AM AEST
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this is a very touching and yet sad poem.. but it was very sentimental.. thanks for sharing.. awesome write and nice flow to it

JENNI

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:46:48 PM AEST
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Very beautiful!

Jennifer

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:12:38 PM AEST
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How very beautiful.. he would be most proud-
Take complete comfort and solace from the 3rd stanza.. the very idea behind the final 3 lines of it, are perpetual my friend.

Eternal happiness to you and yours~

Billy

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 09:32:29 AM AEST
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Oh Leslie dear how I can emphasize with this. In my "Tribute to my Father" I described the identical feelings, but it concluded with my father's personal voice speaking up during the mourning process and reassuring us that he was 'IN THE LIGHT". iT'S A TRUE STORY.
So your father too is with you all the time and prays for you before the throne of od.
A very b eautiful and touching poem on the pain of loss.
Thanks for sharing
lizabeth

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 05:22:54 PM AEST
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Wonderful tribute, beautiful and very moving
I'm sure he is smiling on you now

Steve

Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 08:49:34 PM AEST
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"Sometimes
My soul believes
Your loving presence
Surrounds me
Protects me
Guides me"

Sometimes? The power of his love for you will never "die" and that Spirit of his does the last three ... always and forever to give you strength. Very beautiful and touching write for an obviously wonderful father and person.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

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