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Array ( [sid] => 122280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sale [time] => 2006-06-25 14:52:46 [hometext] => This poem is tongue in cheek , read it all the way through. Sue x [bodytext] => My eyes are here to see the way,
But not much good to me today,
For they are sad and oh so blue,
Take my eyes, I give them to you

My arms are limp and so cold,
They require someone to hold,
Someone to take away the pain,
Take them , make me glad again,

Take my soul, and the sorrow,
And all my wishes for tomorrow,
Make them real, do not delay,
My soul is here to take today,

My heart is still beating away,
Ready for someone to come my way,
Its been broken , but is now repaired,
Waiting to be taken by someone who cares.

And me, well I am the owner,
Who some say is such a loner,
Just a joker, beg your pardon,
Look again, aint I a bargain
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The Sale

Contributed by jerseysue on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 02:52:46 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

My eyes are here to see the way,
But not much good to me today,
For they are sad and oh so blue,
Take my eyes, I give them to you

My arms are limp and so cold,
They require someone to hold,
Someone to take away the pain,
Take them , make me glad again,

Take my soul, and the sorrow,
And all my wishes for tomorrow,
Make them real, do not delay,
My soul is here to take today,

My heart is still beating away,
Ready for someone to come my way,
Its been broken , but is now repaired,
Waiting to be taken by someone who cares.

And me, well I am the owner,
Who some say is such a loner,
Just a joker, beg your pardon,
Look again, aint I a bargain

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-06-25 14:52:46]
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Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 04:51:41 PM AEST
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nicely done!!

wiz

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 05:02:01 PM AEST
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awesome! I like very much... another poem of note sue, well done!

Lv, Tuesdayx

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 05:17:39 PM AEST
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Excellent write Sue. Very clever tongue-in-cheek indeed! lol

Thanks for this. It was most enjoyable. : )

~Breezy

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 12:34:34 AM AEST
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I am sure you are a bargain and someone will get very lucky. Great write

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 01:12:02 PM AEST
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I like this a lot ...

Shari

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 03:30:18 PM AEST
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Too cute...excellent write.
Jeff

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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Of course I'll read it all the way through. :-)

I really like the way you have done this and enjoyed it a lot.

You even take the hint of sadness and make it sound happy.

Very nicely done.

Thank you,

Tim
:-)

Re: The Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:44:52 PM AEST
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Sue~
You are a very clever Miss who can always turn sadness into happiness. Enjoybale and always worth the read. Thank you so much for the rays of hope u shine on us.
warm oz hugs,
~*suzie Q*~

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