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Array ( [sid] => 122260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing [time] => 2006-06-25 02:55:17 [hometext] => You ever feel like this when you get home? [bodytext] => The no one kid goes home to his nothing house.
Where no one welcomes him. Just he and his nothing thoughts tonight.
Laying in the one kid bed with his no one girl
Dreaming of nothing more than having someone
To share this nothing life with. Wouldn't that be something?

Watching other no one lives on his nothing television
Helps it seem like the something world never really exists.
From watching his no one friends on the nothing silver screen
He can wish for the no one to become his someone
But it's never going to happen. Not for a nobody.

Drink one more nothing life tear.
The bottle will feel as empty as his nothing soul.
Numb the no one kid till he never feels again.
Forgetting the no one girl that never existed
Anywhere except for his dizzy nothing head. Drink on.

His one kid heart has nothing left.
Somehow its still bleeding into a no one nightmare.
Waking from sleep because the nothing is taking away
Whatever something gave him courage to dream
For someone in the first place. Nothing is everything.
No one is everyone. He belongs nowhere. Worst of all....

It really seems like its never going to end. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => subgenius [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Nothing

Contributed by subgenius on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 02:55:17 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The no one kid goes home to his nothing house.
Where no one welcomes him. Just he and his nothing thoughts tonight.
Laying in the one kid bed with his no one girl
Dreaming of nothing more than having someone
To share this nothing life with. Wouldn't that be something?

Watching other no one lives on his nothing television
Helps it seem like the something world never really exists.
From watching his no one friends on the nothing silver screen
He can wish for the no one to become his someone
But it's never going to happen. Not for a nobody.

Drink one more nothing life tear.
The bottle will feel as empty as his nothing soul.
Numb the no one kid till he never feels again.
Forgetting the no one girl that never existed
Anywhere except for his dizzy nothing head. Drink on.

His one kid heart has nothing left.
Somehow its still bleeding into a no one nightmare.
Waking from sleep because the nothing is taking away
Whatever something gave him courage to dream
For someone in the first place. Nothing is everything.
No one is everyone. He belongs nowhere. Worst of all....

It really seems like its never going to end.




Copyright © subgenius ... [ 2006-06-25 02:55:17]
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Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 03:22:00 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
U r somebody too so please, take it easy on your self.
We all get down but when we are down the only way left is up.Hang tuff and keep writing.
huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Forgotten_soul on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 01:25:03 PM AEST
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wow, that was the best poem I have read for along time. It sounds alot you captured real life. Its a never ending nothing. nice job.




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