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Array ( [sid] => 122240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you said wait and i did [time] => 2006-06-24 16:18:20 [hometext] => just a little something for my 1st love [bodytext] => You put me in a pickle and told me to wait,
i did and you never gave me any bait.

I waited a total of three years,
and all the time i was just in tears.

I thought you was the one that will be mine for ever,
but the thing is us being 1 was going to be never.

But the truth be told that if i could,
i would hold you all night just like i should.

Your my first love and i realy did love you,
every single word i said i was being true.

Now its like we are 2 worlds apart,
but all i can say is your still my sweetheart. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 24 [informant] => caz241182 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

you said wait and i did

Contributed by caz241182 on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 04:18:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

You put me in a pickle and told me to wait,
i did and you never gave me any bait.

I waited a total of three years,
and all the time i was just in tears.

I thought you was the one that will be mine for ever,
but the thing is us being 1 was going to be never.

But the truth be told that if i could,
i would hold you all night just like i should.

Your my first love and i realy did love you,
every single word i said i was being true.

Now its like we are 2 worlds apart,
but all i can say is your still my sweetheart.

Copyright © caz241182 ... [ 2006-06-24 16:18:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you said wait and i did (User Rating: 1 )
by rockstarr12747 on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 07:31:08 PM AEST
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i met a guy like that ... well we acually grew up together and he didnt come back when he said he would.... he came back 10 years later (laugh out loud) we are now getting married

dont give up on your first love ever even if you find another cause the chances are that he or she is still in love with you

~~ Crystal~~

Re: you said wait and i did (User Rating: 1 )
by sorrowsofabrokenheart on Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 03:03:49 PM AEST
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Sad poem, but you shouldnt wait believe me i was with someone for five years. I thought they had been the one i seen nothing beyond that person. She left me almost a year ago it was hard at first. But I put faith in what others told me. That everything turn out in the end and to just live my life.I am now with an amazing girl. And the ex came back to try and be with me. I told her no. Because someone who tells you to wait is just nine time out of ten stringing you along incase they cant find another. Which sucks and is a horrid thing to do. Its sucks to feel the way that it makes you feel. but truth be told. if you let yourself you will be happy again. besides you dont know what amazing person is passing you by while your waiting. so pick your head up and prove to yourself that your dont need htem. because to be happy with anyone youll have to be hapy with yourself first. if they come back and you get together again thats great. but if not youll find someone else and will be just as happy. i promise

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