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Array ( [sid] => 122181 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Cuts of Fall [time] => 2006-06-23 09:08:19 [hometext] => We'll all meet at fall, when the withered leaves fall from the trees and our withering bodies nourish her roots. [bodytext] => I was found beyond her door
Laved in Blood, it fills the floor
I'm alone again..
Another Scar, Another day
O' my weal, it fades away
As my life descends

Do you see now?
As this firmament breaks
And she looks adown unto me
November seeking
And Fall's blood still leaks
Earthbound, I fall to weep again

Fall was found on the shore
Embracing the sights of nevermore
Caress the fallen angel's face
A funeral, an empty space
I feel her caress upon my face
As I fade again

My blood ran cold
As my body wilted
Whence this room I lay, uncurably, Dying
I'm too blind to see now
Why her love leaks in blood
unto my face, it stains

Where pleasure once ran
Through her crystaline eyes
Causing her never-ceasing heart
To stop with her cries
Where her odyssey led
would bring her to her end
and stop her in her tracks
Where her vanity dies

In the shadows
Lurks a lonely soul
And her silke Mourning Cry
Whilst in the shadows
Roams the fluorescent aglow
That no one dares to follow [comments] => 4 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Lucid_Tides [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
The Cuts of Fall

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:08:19 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



I was found beyond her door
Laved in Blood, it fills the floor
I'm alone again..
Another Scar, Another day
O' my weal, it fades away
As my life descends

Do you see now?
As this firmament breaks
And she looks adown unto me
November seeking
And Fall's blood still leaks
Earthbound, I fall to weep again

Fall was found on the shore
Embracing the sights of nevermore
Caress the fallen angel's face
A funeral, an empty space
I feel her caress upon my face
As I fade again

My blood ran cold
As my body wilted
Whence this room I lay, uncurably, Dying
I'm too blind to see now
Why her love leaks in blood
unto my face, it stains

Where pleasure once ran
Through her crystaline eyes
Causing her never-ceasing heart
To stop with her cries
Where her odyssey led
would bring her to her end
and stop her in her tracks
Where her vanity dies

In the shadows
Lurks a lonely soul
And her silke Mourning Cry
Whilst in the shadows
Roams the fluorescent aglow
That no one dares to follow




Copyright © Lucid_Tides ... [ 2006-06-23 09:08:19]
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Re: The Cuts of Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:46:15 AM AEST
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very beautiful and very sad, reminds me of the song "eulogy for an angel" by From Autumn to Ashes


Re: The Cuts of Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:16:06 PM AEST
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nice write. i really enjoyed reading this poem. its sad but a great read. i look forward to more! also thank you for your comment. i really appreciate it.


Re: The Cuts of Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:19:34 AM AEST
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beautiful yet sad i really like this write

good job


Re: The Cuts of Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 09:10:33 AM AEST
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awesome write...nicely done!!

wiz




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