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Eyes So blue; Looks as they will never end
Body So harmless; Rapier of the dead
Skin Of white snow, nails of blood red.

Lonely and alone, Watching as you sleep
Silent So quiet; Lips that never speak
Inert, don't move in this bondage of Fetter
Listen as you sleep To my love letter

Hurt, so hurt; As if thy were possessed
Sad, So sad; As if thy wanted death
Lest, Depressed; Yearning to cry
Sweven Dreams of death and Wishing to die

Near, By the bed, I see a blood coated knife
Marked On her face, I see not a sign of life
Adust to asunder, we shall call this the end
Sadly, If I shall leave you, our aglow will not ascend

Taken by the light, it took the likest to see
Meek, so bitter; Shalt it Banish thee?
Sleep, once again I watch you sleep, This time forever
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My Letter to You

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:02:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You So understanding; likest to my own trend
Eyes So blue; Looks as they will never end
Body So harmless; Rapier of the dead
Skin Of white snow, nails of blood red.

Lonely and alone, Watching as you sleep
Silent So quiet; Lips that never speak
Inert, don't move in this bondage of Fetter
Listen as you sleep To my love letter

Hurt, so hurt; As if thy were possessed
Sad, So sad; As if thy wanted death
Lest, Depressed; Yearning to cry
Sweven Dreams of death and Wishing to die

Near, By the bed, I see a blood coated knife
Marked On her face, I see not a sign of life
Adust to asunder, we shall call this the end
Sadly, If I shall leave you, our aglow will not ascend

Taken by the light, it took the likest to see
Meek, so bitter; Shalt it Banish thee?
Sleep, once again I watch you sleep, This time forever
Listen As you dream To my love letter

Copyright © Lucid_Tides ... [ 2006-06-23 08:02:37]
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Re: My Letter to You (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeego_of_the_Shadowfolk on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:14:43 AM AEST
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I really liked it. The imagery you used is amazing!

Re: My Letter to You (User Rating: 1 )
by desperatepoet7 on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:17:20 AM AEST
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this is an AMAZiNG poem... i love it :]

Re: My Letter to You (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:31:04 AM AEST
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a beautifully woven tapestry of words leaving one with a picture well defined

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Re: My Letter to You (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:50:50 AM AEST
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great words, great flow and powerful emotions

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