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[aid] => mick
[title] => I will Always be Near
[time] => 2006-06-23 03:16:21
[hometext] => Something that used to worry me when my husband was near death , How I would cope without his strength. We talked about this, and he always said he would watch over me. I think he does. Sue x
[bodytext] => "Do not weep for me " he said,
Do not shed a tear,
For I will be right by your side,
To help you cope my dear,
When you wake up in the morn,
I will bring you the suns bright rays ,
Sent to you from me alone,
To brighten your sad days,
And when you are lonely,
I tell you what I will do,
I'll send you kisses on the wind,
To stop you feeling blue,
And when you see the flowers,
Fresh with morning dew,
These are the tears that I cry,
Because I can't be with you,
And when you walk along the beach,
And waves crash on the shore,
My unseen arms will hold you close,
Just like they did before,
When your body is weary ,
And life is hard it seems,
I will give you the strength and courage,
When I visit you in your dreams,
For I am not far away,
Though death tore us apart,
I will always be there for you,
For I remain inside your heart.
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[counter] => 182
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[ratings] => 4
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
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I will Always be Near
Contributed by
jerseysue
on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 03:16:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"Do not weep for me " he said,
Do not shed a tear,
For I will be right by your side,
To help you cope my dear,
When you wake up in the morn,
I will bring you the suns bright rays ,
Sent to you from me alone,
To brighten your sad days,
And when you are lonely,
I tell you what I will do,
I'll send you kisses on the wind,
To stop you feeling blue,
And when you see the flowers,
Fresh with morning dew,
These are the tears that I cry,
Because I can't be with you,
And when you walk along the beach,
And waves crash on the shore,
My unseen arms will hold you close,
Just like they did before,
When your body is weary ,
And life is hard it seems,
I will give you the strength and courage,
When I visit you in your dreams,
For I am not far away,
Though death tore us apart,
I will always be there for you,
For I remain inside your heart.
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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2006-06-23 03:16:21]
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 03:33:48 AM AEST
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Sue, this is a very beautiful poem and dedication to your husband. My heart goes out to you in this time of sorrow. I can only pray that you are coping well with your loss. Please stay strong for he will be there for you. Just know that when it is your time to go that he will be waiting there for you. With God’s blessings may he watch over you and protect you.
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by twick on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 07:14:06 AM AEST
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| This a very good poem. Wow, I really liked it. Everything was there, emotion, and mechanics. When the heart mixes correctly with the words it's magic and this truly is beautiful. I'm glad to have shared some words with you even if in poem form. |
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 10:13:32 AM AEST
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They are always as near as your heart...well written
NS |
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 07:44:57 PM AEST
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Ever since I've begun interacting with you I've had this question why you had such a great big heart. Now I know why. This is a wonderful tribute to your husband and explains the source of your strength and courage. Good work, Brit.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 09:34:08 PM AEST
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Very beautiful and heart warming. I love the way you wrote it from his perspective.
I am glad you shared this with us. I feel he is watching over you.
My Dad died when I was eight and I feel he still watches over me and that it can happen.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by bluestars on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 01:18:46 AM AEST
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Wow, what a fantasic poem,
it really shows your emotions and it was probably hard for you to put something like this, so deep in words. I'm really sorry for your lost, but like he said he would be looking down on you and making you smile from up above and i'm sure he is.
Best wishes,
~*Eve*~ |
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 09:04:16 AM AEST
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such a touching and beautifully sad write...i loved it...i'm sure he loved it, too!
wiz |
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 04:35:17 PM AEST
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Sue~
Condolances on ur loss my dear friend. I commend you on writing a beautiful and heart touching tribute to ur late husband. He'll always be watching over u and he is always in ur heart. My heart & prayers go out to u Sue~ Take care dear friend.
big warm heartfelt hugs for u,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: I will Always be Near
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by Oneir8dude on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 05:33:33 PM AEST
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Sue,
It makes me feel so warm inside to read your words...
As you know I have had a very bad week with my
Grandpops passing and my daughter turning 16 I
haven't really been able to think straight.. These
words made me realize that our loved ones
are in our hearts and minds and therefore never
gone...
Ty for smacking me in the face and waking me up...
Your friend for life
Bill |
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