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Without you will I be okay
Without you will I be able to survive the day.
Without you will I be able to find my way home
Without you will I be able to learn what I should have known.
Without you will I shed black tears
Without you who will save me from my fears
Without you will life get hard
Without you who will piece together my broken heart shards?
So the question I guess is what will happen to me
When your not what I see?
Will life end, stop the suicide trends
Or will you come back
Because its me who you lack.
What will life be without you?
Will we ever be able to start anew?

♥Kayla Bonzo
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Without You..

Contributed by KaylaB on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 10:27:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Without You

Without you will I be okay
Without you will I be able to survive the day.
Without you will I be able to find my way home
Without you will I be able to learn what I should have known.
Without you will I shed black tears
Without you who will save me from my fears
Without you will life get hard
Without you who will piece together my broken heart shards?
So the question I guess is what will happen to me
When your not what I see?
Will life end, stop the suicide trends
Or will you come back
Because its me who you lack.
What will life be without you?
Will we ever be able to start anew?

♥Kayla Bonzo

Copyright © KaylaB ... [ 2006-06-22 22:27:08]
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Re: Without You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Without You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:07:16 AM AEST
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I think we all ask yourself that question of what will happen after... but we must all keep our heads up high. Great job.

Re: Without You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:20:29 AM AEST
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Something I think we all ask at times when we think of losing someone we love. You did a beautiful job with this. So sad it touched me as its things Iv been asking myself.
Michelle

Re: Without You.. (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:49:29 AM AEST
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Sad, but I think we can each say to ourselves that we gave it our best. Good work here. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz

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