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Array ( [sid] => 122139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Storm [time] => 2006-06-22 15:27:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Storm
~
Rode to work,
On the tail of a storm.
Heavy rain,
Above the norm.
Lightning flashing,
Across the sky.
Fevered pace,
Mounting high.
~
Trees swaying,
From a pounding wind.
Rocking the car,
Again and again.
Puddles forming,
On the road.
Ready to break,
From the heavy load.
~
From out my window,
My eyes did see.
Animals two by two,
In front of me.
Pacing forwardly,
In the rain.
Made me wonder,
From where they came.
~
And as I drove,
This rainy morn.
To the left,
My eyes were torn.
On a hill,
A structure tall.
With a huge deck,
And mighty walls.
~
With a little man,
Waving his arms
Franticly,
Sounding the alarm.
Had the day,
Finally came.
When God wouldn’t,
Stop the rain?
~
Had punishment,
Found the door?
From all the years,
We simply ignored.
The existence of man,
Ending soon.
From the sin,
That sealed our dome.
~
With a crack of thunder,
I woke up scared.
Thankful to be awake,
From the dream I feared.
Looked out the window,
The sun was bright,
With a rainbow beaming,
To my delight.
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Storm

Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Storm
~
Rode to work,
On the tail of a storm.
Heavy rain,
Above the norm.
Lightning flashing,
Across the sky.
Fevered pace,
Mounting high.
~
Trees swaying,
From a pounding wind.
Rocking the car,
Again and again.
Puddles forming,
On the road.
Ready to break,
From the heavy load.
~
From out my window,
My eyes did see.
Animals two by two,
In front of me.
Pacing forwardly,
In the rain.
Made me wonder,
From where they came.
~
And as I drove,
This rainy morn.
To the left,
My eyes were torn.
On a hill,
A structure tall.
With a huge deck,
And mighty walls.
~
With a little man,
Waving his arms
Franticly,
Sounding the alarm.
Had the day,
Finally came.
When God wouldn’t,
Stop the rain?
~
Had punishment,
Found the door?
From all the years,
We simply ignored.
The existence of man,
Ending soon.
From the sin,
That sealed our dome.
~
With a crack of thunder,
I woke up scared.
Thankful to be awake,
From the dream I feared.
Looked out the window,
The sun was bright,
With a rainbow beaming,
To my delight.

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2006-06-22 15:27:28]
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Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by kreechur on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 03:36:49 PM AEST
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god hates me too.....

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 05:15:25 PM AEST
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sounds like a rough time

nice write

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 01:14:47 AM AEST
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I love your writing :) Keep it up man. Your so good at it.

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by wrdz on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 03:14:54 PM AEST
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I needed that reminder of what was. We all do at some time or another. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Winterland on Sunday, 25th June 2006 @ 04:58:01 PM AEST
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Very nice work Jeff! I especially liked the rainbow ending. Wonderful message for all of us in there.

Smiles,
Jennifer

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