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Array ( [sid] => 122117 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Blade of Fate - II [time] => 2006-06-21 22:58:13 [hometext] => Another soul misguided but this lonely blade of Fate [bodytext] =>

Shadows cast,
Dead roses fade,
For our lives we have prayed
She shall come,
We shall die,
One last time we shall cry

Her embrace shall kill us all,
One-by-one we shall fall,
As I'm scortched,
I see her eyes,
I see why this Demon cries

As she cried,
Her screams were sweven Arias
that withered My Soul
Like tears of the Amor,
A breath-taking toll
And she cried,
for this flaming hell,
A Totured soul-erotica,
A sad soul that once fell

Hidden in this forest mist,
She hides her burden's pain
In a world of her icy tryst,
She cuts into her vein
Her cuts stand so lucid
She shall kill me if she sees
I now endure the pain she feels,
With a piercing glance between the trees

And she whispers
Soft notes that caressed
Her poetry hit me,
As if stabbings to my chest
Wouldst she greet me
In a tryst of a Dream?
Her last tapper snuffed
A life settled in a stream

My eyes,
Saddened,
now parched,
Thus, I shall not let them shut
I watch her last breath
Taken by the cut

This Blade of Fate
Has taken another life
This once beautiful spirit
Lived on the knife

A suttle moment of silence
Came with the marks of hate
Another soul misguided
By this lonel blade of fate

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The Blade of Fate - II

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:58:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry





Shadows cast,
Dead roses fade,
For our lives we have prayed
She shall come,
We shall die,
One last time we shall cry

Her embrace shall kill us all,
One-by-one we shall fall,
As I'm scortched,
I see her eyes,
I see why this Demon cries

As she cried,
Her screams were sweven Arias
that withered My Soul
Like tears of the Amor,
A breath-taking toll
And she cried,
for this flaming hell,
A Totured soul-erotica,
A sad soul that once fell

Hidden in this forest mist,
She hides her burden's pain
In a world of her icy tryst,
She cuts into her vein
Her cuts stand so lucid
She shall kill me if she sees
I now endure the pain she feels,
With a piercing glance between the trees

And she whispers
Soft notes that caressed
Her poetry hit me,
As if stabbings to my chest
Wouldst she greet me
In a tryst of a Dream?
Her last tapper snuffed
A life settled in a stream

My eyes,
Saddened,
now parched,
Thus, I shall not let them shut
I watch her last breath
Taken by the cut

This Blade of Fate
Has taken another life
This once beautiful spirit
Lived on the knife

A suttle moment of silence
Came with the marks of hate
Another soul misguided
By this lonel blade of fate





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Re: The Blade of Fate - II (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:20:33 PM AEST
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wow nicely done
sad yet very dark
just the way i like it.
great job


Re: The Blade of Fate - II (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:36:30 PM AEST
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wow ...nicely done. It was very dark but deep. I like this a lot.

~Lo




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