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Array ( [sid] => 122107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''You'' [time] => 2006-06-21 17:15:37 [hometext] => i wrote this poem not long after my life was turned around when i moved to live with my father just to turn around and live with my soon to be step grandparents [bodytext] => Saturday you party
Sunday you preach
Monday you laugh and joke
Tuesday you talk and choke

Wednesday nothing to do
Thursday you tell what is true
Friday is the cry day
Though their isn't much to say

Jan. you think about the decision
Feb. you laugh about the collision
Mar. you forget the past
Apr.you dont konw the last

May is your holiday
Jun.you dont care what you say
Jul. your truth is out
Aug.isnt to dout
Sep. inst to shout

Oct. is something new
Nov. you live with a crew
Dec.aint far away

2006 you dont know what to say
2007 you dont run a day
2008 the love will stay
2009 you are legal

2010 you see an eagel
2011 you're but 20
2012 the years go so fast
2013 you remember the past

2014 is the repeated number in your head
2015 loved ones you wish werent dead
2016 wish you were a kid
2017 wish you didnt do what you did

2018 old as you holidayed number
2019 the fights come back in you head
2020 but you know those nights are dead [comments] => 1 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 48 [informant] => calforinagirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
''You''

Contributed by calforinagirl on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 05:15:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Saturday you party
Sunday you preach
Monday you laugh and joke
Tuesday you talk and choke

Wednesday nothing to do
Thursday you tell what is true
Friday is the cry day
Though their isn't much to say

Jan. you think about the decision
Feb. you laugh about the collision
Mar. you forget the past
Apr.you dont konw the last

May is your holiday
Jun.you dont care what you say
Jul. your truth is out
Aug.isnt to dout
Sep. inst to shout

Oct. is something new
Nov. you live with a crew
Dec.aint far away

2006 you dont know what to say
2007 you dont run a day
2008 the love will stay
2009 you are legal

2010 you see an eagel
2011 you're but 20
2012 the years go so fast
2013 you remember the past

2014 is the repeated number in your head
2015 loved ones you wish werent dead
2016 wish you were a kid
2017 wish you didnt do what you did

2018 old as you holidayed number
2019 the fights come back in you head
2020 but you know those nights are dead




Copyright © calforinagirl ... [ 2006-06-21 17:15:37]
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Re: ''You'' (User Rating: 1 )
by lilmom101 on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 11:48:52 PM AEST
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this good alot of good thought and point although i think you skied from one thought to another in one place doing the same thing all the time myself i understand you get a thought and yo write it read it and cant find the one word to connect it all but always try to re read and re read or let some one suggest something




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