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Array ( [sid] => 122077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lash out [time] => 2006-06-21 04:36:58 [hometext] => this poem sucks [bodytext] => i wanna lash out
i want people to feel the hate
the hate that i feel
i wanna lash out
i wanna kill innocent people
to prove a point
i wanna lash out
i wanna blow up a school
filled with small kids
i want the world to feel
feel the hopelessness i feel
i want to lash out
i couldnt kill enough innocent children
to get my point across.
i want to lash out

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lash out

Contributed by kreechur on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 04:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i wanna lash out
i want people to feel the hate
the hate that i feel
i wanna lash out
i wanna kill innocent people
to prove a point
i wanna lash out
i wanna blow up a school
filled with small kids
i want the world to feel
feel the hopelessness i feel
i want to lash out
i couldnt kill enough innocent children
to get my point across.
i want to lash out

Copyright © kreechur ... [ 2006-06-21 04:36:58]
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Re: lash out (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 04:42:18 AM AEST
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ok, um, sorta scary, please don't blow up any schools. but yeah, i know the feeling, i'd say something cheesy along the lines of "anytime you wanna lash out write a poem" but....anyway, good luck...

~natalya

Re: lash out (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 05:10:45 AM AEST
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I hope you are just going to stick to the poem and not take any direct action... :)

Take care.

~Davinah~

Re: lash out (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 12:03:29 PM AEST
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sometimes we all wanna lash out and kill people thats the way the world and people think.Its good to write about it then take action.
There was a few times i wanna kill a few people but thats not how it works

Re: lash out (User Rating: 1 )
by myselfindreams on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:05:02 PM AEST
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a lot of emotion written here. instead of lashing out, people could share love, suppose that takes too much work. good write, lots of anger.

Jalens

Re: lash out (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 12:01:38 AM AEST
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The author's note said it all.

Re: lash out (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 10:59:39 PM AEST
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well, man_on_high took the words out of my mouth, literally...and to think, you have the nerve to critique (as i imagine you would call what you do, more like cowardly bashing) other poets...which i guess is sort of a misnomer, for you are hardly one.

this was not poetry in any sense of the word, you must be proud.

wizard
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