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Array ( [sid] => 122000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => passing cars [time] => 2006-06-19 18:18:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => my mad exhibit is true
telling of the absurdity
i feel and go through for you.

floating through scarlet space
i am an angry monument
to you, to me, or to whatever
it is we have.

everytime i see you, i'm afraid
it will be the last
everytime you touch me
i fear the feeling will shortly pass.

i cry for grace to save me-
i run for cover whenever you call
but clumsy me, i only find you
and the grin on your face as you
watch me stumble to my fall.

i look for your face each day
in passing cars
though you're minutes away,
it seems unbearably far.

you must be illusion for i sense
no depth to anything you say
and i must be the crazy one
to have believed
that you are someone
who might actually stay. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 2 [informant] => priss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

passing cars

Contributed by priss on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 06:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

my mad exhibit is true
telling of the absurdity
i feel and go through for you.

floating through scarlet space
i am an angry monument
to you, to me, or to whatever
it is we have.

everytime i see you, i'm afraid
it will be the last
everytime you touch me
i fear the feeling will shortly pass.

i cry for grace to save me-
i run for cover whenever you call
but clumsy me, i only find you
and the grin on your face as you
watch me stumble to my fall.

i look for your face each day
in passing cars
though you're minutes away,
it seems unbearably far.

you must be illusion for i sense
no depth to anything you say
and i must be the crazy one
to have believed
that you are someone
who might actually stay.

Copyright © priss ... [ 2006-06-19 18:18:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: passing cars (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 06:23:41 PM AEST
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I love this poem. I think you've done enough of the running though, let someone else put the trainers on! Be cool because you never know, maybe you have the same effect on someone else but you've been too busy with your own insecurities that you haven't even noticed them!

Re: passing cars (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 09:09:48 PM AEST
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great write..i truly loved it...i can relate to this on every level...nice job!!

wiz

Re: passing cars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 10:50:38 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this, a very relatable feeling, good personal topic.

Re: passing cars (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 07:04:39 PM AEST
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Loves it!!!! It was awesome like you !
Peace, love, and bubblegum!!!
-kyle

Re: passing cars (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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'passing cars' and ships in the night. By this piece let it be known you did your job of holding true to your heart.

Good job getting this on the page.

Blessings
Yang

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