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Array ( [sid] => 121936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vision - on Corpus Christi Day [time] => 2006-06-18 12:00:18 [hometext] => This is my mother's poem, composed on the occasion of Corpus Christi Day, June 18, this year coinciding with Fathers Day. [bodytext] =>




I had a vision in a quiet night
That overwhelmed me by its awesome might;
It was in June, on Corpus Christi Day
When all the world in bloom and sunshine lay.

Altar boys’ bells now from a distance rang
While little girls in white dresses sang;
I watched the pageantry from my alcove
This passing of the Sacrament of Love.

Sweet was the childrens’ song as they marched on;
But our blessed Lord- - he walked alone;
No paten, chalice, host, - He had dispensed
With sacred vessels and with priestly hands.

No gold monstrance nor shielding panoply,
No honor guards to escort the pageantry;
Yet the procession wound its usual way
As every year on Corpus Christi Day.

In full manhood’s shape I saw His form of light
My eyes and spirit feasted on His sight.
How could such wondreous grace be granted me?
Love without end in beauteous majesty.

Spellbound, enraptured on the ground I knelt
While Summum Bonum in its glory I beheld;
Whose radiance beyond compare set me aglow;
And heaven’s glory here with us below

Rose petals flew, - he turned to look at me-
Grace without measure! love! Benignity!
He passed on, but once more He slowly turned
To meet my eyes, and all my being burned.

But how could words describe, impart, or teach
In feeble utterances, - human speech
Express what felt my soul, my flesh and bone.
Oh blissful light! - I woke - the vision was gone.


Above is the English translation of my mother's original German version as shown below.





Traumbild

Ein Traumbild ohnegleichen sah ich in stiller Nacht
Nie wird dem Sinn entweichen, dess’ wundersame Macht.
An einem Junimorgen, es war Frohnleichnamstag,
Die Welt im Fruehlingskleide, hell in der Sonne lag.

Die Ministrantengloeckchen verkuendeten von fern
Das Sacrament der Liebe, das Nahen unseres Herrn,
Ich stand in einer Ecke, da kam die Prozession
In feierlichem Zuge an mir vorueber schon.

Die Kinder Lieder sangen in Kleidern weiss und rein,
Dann kam der Herr gegangen, so feierlich, allein!
Nicht von des Priester’s Haenden, in gold umrahmter Pracht,
Nicht unter Baldachines Schutz, getragen und bewacht.

In voller Mannesgroesse, frei ging die Lichtgestalt;
Wie brannte meine Seele, durchdringende Gewalt.
Voll Ehrfurcht, weltverloren, sank ich in meine Knie,
Nie wird das Bild verblassen dass dieser Traum verlieh.

Ergriffen trank mein Auge so grosse Seligkeit
Wahrhaftig ging des Weges der Herr der Herrlichkeit.
Er sah mich an so guetig, so unaussprechlich mild.
“Wie bist Du schoen mein Himmel, von so viel Licht erfuellt."

Wer kann in Worte kleiden, die Sprache ewigen Licht’s?
Man moechte erst vergehen, am Menschenwort gebrichts.
Er ging an mir vorueber und wandte noch im Gehen
Sein Antlitz sanft herueber um noch nach mir zu sehen.

Es strahlte dieses Antlitz den wahren Himmel aus,
Es stroemte Ruh und Frieden aus diesem Blick heraus.
Der Herr, so schoen und heilig, so licht, so klar und rein,
Er labte meine Seele, durchdrang mein ganzes Sein!

Von Seligkeit durchflutet ward ich zu dieser Stund
Und geb' mit kargen Worten von diesem Bilde kund.
Wie brannte meine Seele, geheimnissvolle Macht!
O - selig Licht!!-- doch ploetzlich war ich vom Traum erwacht.

by: Maria Magdalena Doppelmayr

Publ. in Volume 2 of Poetry by E.D -The VantagePress




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Vision - on Corpus Christi Day

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 12:00:18 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual








I had a vision in a quiet night
That overwhelmed me by its awesome might;
It was in June, on Corpus Christi Day
When all the world in bloom and sunshine lay.

Altar boys’ bells now from a distance rang
While little girls in white dresses sang;
I watched the pageantry from my alcove
This passing of the Sacrament of Love.

Sweet was the childrens’ song as they marched on;
But our blessed Lord- - he walked alone;
No paten, chalice, host, - He had dispensed
With sacred vessels and with priestly hands.

No gold monstrance nor shielding panoply,
No honor guards to escort the pageantry;
Yet the procession wound its usual way
As every year on Corpus Christi Day.

In full manhood’s shape I saw His form of light
My eyes and spirit feasted on His sight.
How could such wondreous grace be granted me?
Love without end in beauteous majesty.

Spellbound, enraptured on the ground I knelt
While Summum Bonum in its glory I beheld;
Whose radiance beyond compare set me aglow;
And heaven’s glory here with us below

Rose petals flew, - he turned to look at me-
Grace without measure! love! Benignity!
He passed on, but once more He slowly turned
To meet my eyes, and all my being burned.

But how could words describe, impart, or teach
In feeble utterances, - human speech
Express what felt my soul, my flesh and bone.
Oh blissful light! - I woke - the vision was gone.


Above is the English translation of my mother's original German version as shown below.





Traumbild

Ein Traumbild ohnegleichen sah ich in stiller Nacht
Nie wird dem Sinn entweichen, dess’ wundersame Macht.
An einem Junimorgen, es war Frohnleichnamstag,
Die Welt im Fruehlingskleide, hell in der Sonne lag.

Die Ministrantengloeckchen verkuendeten von fern
Das Sacrament der Liebe, das Nahen unseres Herrn,
Ich stand in einer Ecke, da kam die Prozession
In feierlichem Zuge an mir vorueber schon.

Die Kinder Lieder sangen in Kleidern weiss und rein,
Dann kam der Herr gegangen, so feierlich, allein!
Nicht von des Priester’s Haenden, in gold umrahmter Pracht,
Nicht unter Baldachines Schutz, getragen und bewacht.

In voller Mannesgroesse, frei ging die Lichtgestalt;
Wie brannte meine Seele, durchdringende Gewalt.
Voll Ehrfurcht, weltverloren, sank ich in meine Knie,
Nie wird das Bild verblassen dass dieser Traum verlieh.

Ergriffen trank mein Auge so grosse Seligkeit
Wahrhaftig ging des Weges der Herr der Herrlichkeit.
Er sah mich an so guetig, so unaussprechlich mild.
“Wie bist Du schoen mein Himmel, von so viel Licht erfuellt."

Wer kann in Worte kleiden, die Sprache ewigen Licht’s?
Man moechte erst vergehen, am Menschenwort gebrichts.
Er ging an mir vorueber und wandte noch im Gehen
Sein Antlitz sanft herueber um noch nach mir zu sehen.

Es strahlte dieses Antlitz den wahren Himmel aus,
Es stroemte Ruh und Frieden aus diesem Blick heraus.
Der Herr, so schoen und heilig, so licht, so klar und rein,
Er labte meine Seele, durchdrang mein ganzes Sein!

Von Seligkeit durchflutet ward ich zu dieser Stund
Und geb' mit kargen Worten von diesem Bilde kund.
Wie brannte meine Seele, geheimnissvolle Macht!
O - selig Licht!!-- doch ploetzlich war ich vom Traum erwacht.

by: Maria Magdalena Doppelmayr

Publ. in Volume 2 of Poetry by E.D -The VantagePress








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Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 05:43:18 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem with a lovely vision by your mother! O - selig Licht!
Butch


Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 03:19:44 AM AEST
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The proper rhyme In between "night" and "might" in the first two lines was too direct, as it was between the following "sang" and "rang" in the first two lines of S2. The stress falling on the final word in a sequence is not necessary to achieve a flow of sonics, and the arrangement of words to achieve alliteration (displayed in "boys' bells") is also unnessary.Witness:

The bang of the alter boys' bells rang
from a distance; little girls in white dresses
sang as I watched the pageantry from the alcove, the sacrement of love passing.

I have included an echoic word in the sequenceto strengthen the alliteration, and manipulated the order of words
for purposes of sonics. The context of the dialogue has not been altered or abstracted in any way, and by eliminating functionless syllables The stanza "reads" a lot better.

I will continue critiquing this further at a later date.

you're welcome,
black.


Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 03:33:57 AM AEST
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Sorry, When I viewed my previous comment The stanza did not appear as I intended:

The bangs of the altar boy's bells rang
at distance; little girls in white dresses
sang as watched the pageantry from my alcove, the sacrement of love passing.

I apologise also for the punctual errors. It is late, and I am tired.

you're welcome,
black.


Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 04:44:50 AM AEST
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You have your mother's beautifull looks and had u not said it was your mothers and the picture I couldn't tell it wasn't you writing.
U have been bleesed not only here good looks but her amazing talent in many ways.
Thanks for sharing this.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Friday, 23rd June 2006 @ 08:52:58 PM AEST
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hugs elizabeth!! I love to read these poems of your mothers- blessed with such a gift she was!!! Peace and Light........Sara


Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:48:31 PM AEST
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Thank you for this lovely poem Mother Elizabeth, the year sure went fast... I love you and your mothers' poem.. may she be resting forever in heaven...

What He did was not easy, He pleased His Father, and I am very thankful He walked alone, He is worthy, and what He did was worth it.. for His Father, Him, and us....La paix soit avec toi, etreintes…

RaquelLeah DuPont



Re: Vision - on Corpus Christi Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:04:10 PM AEST
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You are your Mothers daughter - in more ways than the physical; and for that,- we all profit when we read your poems. Thanks to God for his gifts.




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