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Wise words never changed my mind
I began to realize
It's I against the world,
Not the world against I
I tried so hard to free
Something I never wanted to be
Hidden somewhere inside of me
Something I'm ashamed to see
Sometimes I can't wait for tomorrow
I'll sleep the night in sorrow

And in this moment
I'll forget everything that matters
While watching as tomorrow shatters

Take a breath, and step back
Let fate light the path
The flame isn't burning anymore
Listen close and think the wisest thought
Because our weal can not be bought
Clear my mind on tranquility's shore

And in this moment
I'll forget everything that matters
While watching as tomorrow shatters
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Tranquility's Shore

Contributed by Lucid_Tides on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:16:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Another day would have been my demise
Wise words never changed my mind
I began to realize
It's I against the world,
Not the world against I
I tried so hard to free
Something I never wanted to be
Hidden somewhere inside of me
Something I'm ashamed to see
Sometimes I can't wait for tomorrow
I'll sleep the night in sorrow

And in this moment
I'll forget everything that matters
While watching as tomorrow shatters

Take a breath, and step back
Let fate light the path
The flame isn't burning anymore
Listen close and think the wisest thought
Because our weal can not be bought
Clear my mind on tranquility's shore

And in this moment
I'll forget everything that matters
While watching as tomorrow shatters

Copyright © Lucid_Tides ... [ 2006-06-17 14:16:28]
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Re: Tranquility's Shore (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:31:07 PM AEST
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very well expressed i loved this write and thanks for sharing

Re: Tranquility's Shore (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 06:46:01 PM AEST
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I like this flow

Re: Tranquility's Shore (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 01:21:23 PM AEST
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Lucid_Tides- Thankyou for the comment on TOO LATE. I really appreciate all feedback. I absolutely loved this write. It was definitely emotional and the conveyed emotions are so raw.
Peace, love, and bubblegum!!!
-artjunkiekyle

Re: Tranquility's Shore (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 11:57:13 PM AEST
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An outstanding and superb write brilliantly penned by the very talented Lucid. You have such a flare with a pen and u can always deliver a write well worth the read.

And in this moment
I'll forget everything that matters
While watching as tomorrow shatters

I'm sure alot of us can relate to what you've written my friend. Well done ~*LT*~
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~

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