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Array ( [sid] => 121889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im Breaking Down Again [time] => 2006-06-17 01:38:58 [hometext] => This poem, it just came to me, and I havent been here in a while, So I am posting once again. [bodytext] => Im breaking down again
All you see now
Is a plain little me
Insides showing through
You see the lies through my teeth
You see that hidden pain
That secret little tear
You see the true me
Simple little Emily.

Im breaking down again
Giving you my all
Even if I never win.
You will always say
Being me is a sin
Even when you don't know me
You think my lifes path is chosen
Your quick to judge
Someone you have never met.

Im breaking down again
That sinned little girl
The one that likes other girls
Am I bound for hell?
Cursed deep within
My tortured
Tattered
Useless soul.
Am I broken now?
Useless beyond your control
Just a piece if trash
Throw me to the rubbish pile
Never to be needed again.

Im a broken doll now
Look at all the pieces.
Theres a piece of my heart.
Have it; you can keep it.
And you, you can keep this piece
Of my broken soul
Blackened with its sin.
And this piece here, its for you
Just a piece of my filthy flesh
That which she touched again and again.
And you my blood
For that girl that with these feelings
Mingling in its dirtiness
Running hot in these torn veins.

I am broken now
You can take me
And do as you wish
For I am everyones
Own
Little
Piece of garbage [comments] => 3 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Shattered_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
Im Breaking Down Again

Contributed by Shattered_soul on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:38:58 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Im breaking down again
All you see now
Is a plain little me
Insides showing through
You see the lies through my teeth
You see that hidden pain
That secret little tear
You see the true me
Simple little Emily.

Im breaking down again
Giving you my all
Even if I never win.
You will always say
Being me is a sin
Even when you don't know me
You think my lifes path is chosen
Your quick to judge
Someone you have never met.

Im breaking down again
That sinned little girl
The one that likes other girls
Am I bound for hell?
Cursed deep within
My tortured
Tattered
Useless soul.
Am I broken now?
Useless beyond your control
Just a piece if trash
Throw me to the rubbish pile
Never to be needed again.

Im a broken doll now
Look at all the pieces.
Theres a piece of my heart.
Have it; you can keep it.
And you, you can keep this piece
Of my broken soul
Blackened with its sin.
And this piece here, its for you
Just a piece of my filthy flesh
That which she touched again and again.
And you my blood
For that girl that with these feelings
Mingling in its dirtiness
Running hot in these torn veins.

I am broken now
You can take me
And do as you wish
For I am everyones
Own
Little
Piece of garbage




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Re: Im Breaking Down Again (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 01:56:15 AM AEST
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Welcome back and what a magnificent come back.
Incredible written.
huggs,
emy


Re: Im Breaking Down Again (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:38:10 AM AEST
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awesome write thanks for sharing


Re: Im Breaking Down Again (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 18th June 2006 @ 06:52:22 AM AEST
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All the crippled pilgrims feel the emotional torture of this flow...




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