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Fallen Beauty
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spike
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Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 09:01:55 AM in AEST
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Fallen Angel / Angel Caido Eduardo Luna http://www.lunaartusa.com
Amber eyes, glowing softly,
Form and face of quiet frailty
Voice of once such golden timbre,
Worn away to just a whisper
Heaven cast you out as angel
Fallen, but still beautiful
Hands of pale fingers, slender,
Hold to dreams that will not linger
Gone too, wings of brightest light
That raised you high into the night,
Singed away by battles royal
Grounded, but still ethereal
Others may have turned their backs,
Or spurned you with their cold attacks
Hurt you in your weary weakness,
Scourged you with their spiteful bleakness
Made you feel so small and fearful
Broken, but still prideful
In this place you’ve found respite,
A chance to maybe set things right
Where earthly love is for your taking
Fields of promise, quietly waiting,
Waiting for a kindred soul
Fallow, yet still bountiful.
Copyright ©
spike
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 09:44:33 AM AEST
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You have the most exquisite way of tucking your heart in between the words as you set them on the page. This is so warm and so beautiful that it washes over the reader in the loveliest of ways. It fills me with an emotion that I cannot quite express.
On occasion, an extraordinary poem can move me to tears and this, dear Spike - this.... did.
~Snemmy
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by poet_in_waiting on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:20:41 AM AEST
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| suddenly this painting that i have always loved, is evn more real .. well done |
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by bronzen on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 03:26:40 PM AEST
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| this write is so excellent i loved everything about it thaks for sharing great penmanship |
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 07:12:01 PM AEST
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Spike~
WoW, I have always been a fan of ur extraordinary work. You bring across such power, emotions and depth with each and every one of ur writes. A fine poet who displays the most outstanding penned masterpieces any given time. You never cease to amaze me Spike~ Well done my friend.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by Sasha on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 11:04:13 PM AEST
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| It was a pleasure to read this poem, very well written indeed.. |
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 10:33:59 AM AEST
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I think I told you once before that I find it hard to comment on your poems some times. It has always been that way, the better the poem, the less I can say about it. I find it very hard to say anything right now.
This poem doesn't seem to need words to be spoken about it...
As usual, Spike, you have left me speechless.
You are definitely one of my favourite poetrs on site.
Keep up the good work.
Phyllis xxx |
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 07:25:10 PM AEST
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Oh, my dearest spike. How wonderfuliy sad and beautiful.
This is one of your very best methinks. It touched me
so deeply and in a way I can't even grasp. Almost
as if with a silent power. A soft comfort that we can
not see, but can definitely feel..
completely moved-
~Breezy |
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Re: Fallen Beauty
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 24th June 2006 @ 09:33:53 PM AEST
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This poem is nice, but the last two lines are absolutely beautiful. Very nicely done, wiht good imagery. Good job.
xXx
~kei |
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