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Array ( [sid] => 121814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shadows of the underworld [time] => 2006-06-15 12:43:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm walking down the street of lonelyness
Trying to find a way to leave.
No one seems to want to help me
I feel like they can't see.
No matter what I do to try to escape
I'm put right back here
Oh what an earth am I to do?

I feel like I'm in the shadows of the under world
Everyone knows I'm here but no one seems to care
I make noise to get attention but no one hears
I try to break free of the shadows but the always follow me
For eternity.

I've noticed that no matter how hard I try
No matter what I do
I'm just going to be pushed aside.
If I ever break free will I even ever be seen?
I guess it's the way it's ment to be!
Who would want to see me anyway?
I feel like I'm going round in circles and
no one can here me scream!

Why is it that I am forever tortured?
Why can't I just fit in?
If I had the chance to break free
I would throw off my chains and turn to the world
And I would shout at the top of my lungs
"I LOVE YOU WORLD AND I LOVE MY LIFE!"
But all I want to do is end it now
And never have to be hurt again! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Mixed_Emotional_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Shadows of the underworld

Contributed by Mixed_Emotional_Girl on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 12:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I'm walking down the street of lonelyness
Trying to find a way to leave.
No one seems to want to help me
I feel like they can't see.
No matter what I do to try to escape
I'm put right back here
Oh what an earth am I to do?

I feel like I'm in the shadows of the under world
Everyone knows I'm here but no one seems to care
I make noise to get attention but no one hears
I try to break free of the shadows but the always follow me
For eternity.

I've noticed that no matter how hard I try
No matter what I do
I'm just going to be pushed aside.
If I ever break free will I even ever be seen?
I guess it's the way it's ment to be!
Who would want to see me anyway?
I feel like I'm going round in circles and
no one can here me scream!

Why is it that I am forever tortured?
Why can't I just fit in?
If I had the chance to break free
I would throw off my chains and turn to the world
And I would shout at the top of my lungs
"I LOVE YOU WORLD AND I LOVE MY LIFE!"
But all I want to do is end it now
And never have to be hurt again!




Copyright © Mixed_Emotional_Girl ... [ 2006-06-15 12:43:01]
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Re: Shadows of the underworld (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 12:52:10 PM AEST
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I think everyone has a point where they feel like that. I love the emotion you put into this and i can feel your frustration. It could use more imagery i think but its good none the less. Don't get to dragged down by other ppl!


Re: Shadows of the underworld (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:07:36 PM AEST
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Very nice written
God Bless!




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