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Array ( [sid] => 121786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Token of Anna Marie [time] => 2006-06-14 20:36:39 [hometext] => I hope you all like this as much as I did. It's a re-write of a poem of mine by Krystal (Unbreakable on the site) [bodytext] => Her watchful presence stole my heart
"I love you, Anna Marie"
Before I let the words depart
her eyes had answered me:

"Hush my darling," our gaze met,
"Words are but a safety net,
Don't drown me in cliches, instead
see beauty in what's left unsaid."

Engagement ring left in a glass
of wine my loved one sips
before another word could pass
her fingers gently touched my lips:

"Hush my darling," her touch meant,
"Words are but a message sent,
while all the world would see us wed
see beauty in what's left unsaid."

It seemed a month she'd been away
"I love you Anna Marie"
the words that would not let her stay
her sweet voice said to me:

"Hush my darling, for I must go
Words are but a seed to sow,
A vow can strike the moment dead,
there's beauty in what's left unsaid." [comments] => 3 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 24 [informant] => fielding88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
A Token of Anna Marie

Contributed by fielding88 on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Her watchful presence stole my heart
"I love you, Anna Marie"
Before I let the words depart
her eyes had answered me:

"Hush my darling," our gaze met,
"Words are but a safety net,
Don't drown me in cliches, instead
see beauty in what's left unsaid."

Engagement ring left in a glass
of wine my loved one sips
before another word could pass
her fingers gently touched my lips:

"Hush my darling," her touch meant,
"Words are but a message sent,
while all the world would see us wed
see beauty in what's left unsaid."

It seemed a month she'd been away
"I love you Anna Marie"
the words that would not let her stay
her sweet voice said to me:

"Hush my darling, for I must go
Words are but a seed to sow,
A vow can strike the moment dead,
there's beauty in what's left unsaid."




Copyright © fielding88 ... [ 2006-06-14 20:36:39]
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Re: A Token of Anna Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:44:26 PM AEST
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WOW! This is an amazing write. Damn I could visualize the entire conversation and the person sitting in a room thinking back. This is great. I love it...

MaJ


Re: A Token of Anna Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:36:47 PM AEST
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Very good write...I love it this piece..
God Bless!


Re: A Token of Anna Marie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 11:16:48 PM AEST
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This is a very good write!!




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