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Array ( [sid] => 121783 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sinner-Part 2 [time] => 2006-06-14 20:26:20 [hometext] => I am back. [bodytext] => The banishment of one's own soul,
the punishment.
The quest for happiness,
all I've ever asked for.
Redemption for myself.
Lead me to the truth of my existence.
I fall before you,
I beg for mercy,
head in hands, I lay before you.
but I am nothing,
I am the sinner,
each sin laid bare,
each injustice bleeds, in my name,
each tear,
a lifetime of sorrows.
I am shamed.
My anguish complete.
My heart ever aching.
I plead for deliverence,
but I am nothing,
I am the sinner,
my pleas unanswered,
my love forgotten.
I drown in the depths of my own misery.
The torment of my own creation.
You look away.
And the pain of my own insignificance,
cuts me through and through.
I grow weary of this journey,
a battle I cannot win,
and still my passions flicker on in my eyes.
I surrender myself,
broken by defeat,
offer all that I am,
and realize,
I am nothing,
but the sinner.

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The Sinner-Part 2

Contributed by thesinner on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The banishment of one's own soul,
the punishment.
The quest for happiness,
all I've ever asked for.
Redemption for myself.
Lead me to the truth of my existence.
I fall before you,
I beg for mercy,
head in hands, I lay before you.
but I am nothing,
I am the sinner,
each sin laid bare,
each injustice bleeds, in my name,
each tear,
a lifetime of sorrows.
I am shamed.
My anguish complete.
My heart ever aching.
I plead for deliverence,
but I am nothing,
I am the sinner,
my pleas unanswered,
my love forgotten.
I drown in the depths of my own misery.
The torment of my own creation.
You look away.
And the pain of my own insignificance,
cuts me through and through.
I grow weary of this journey,
a battle I cannot win,
and still my passions flicker on in my eyes.
I surrender myself,
broken by defeat,
offer all that I am,
and realize,
I am nothing,
but the sinner.





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Re: The Sinner-Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:18:24 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Welcome back.
We're all sinner.
hUGGS,
EMY


Re: The Sinner-Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 04:26:42 AM AEST
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welcome back sinner

great write.


Re: The Sinner-Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 07:41:32 PM AEST
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strong strong words... each of us have felt this way before... you bore you soul well here... your pain is apparent. GREAT write. A++++


Re: The Sinner-Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Sunday, 27th December 2020 @ 03:57:26 AM AEST
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i remember fondly these days and nights. I am sorry i turned away...I plead for deliverance as well...




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