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Array ( [sid] => 121781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The One Who Did [time] => 2006-06-14 19:57:49 [hometext] => Just a small tale of love coming back (fiction) [bodytext] => Crazy running here and there
all night long my heart aches
no one to care

He came back to me
I dont know what to do
why would he want me back
with all the changes I put him
through

He wanted us to try our love
again hey that was a U Turn
I stomped on his heart one day
and all his trust in me I surely
burned

I didnt feel I was good enough
for him I took a back seat to
being monogamous
I thought if it was cool I would
play both sides of the fence

Im sitting here for a moment
my regrets are overwhelming me
its been so long since Ive seen him
if decide to give us another shot
where do we go from here

Its running through my head those
words Im so sorry
I cried them over and over again

That day I wanted to forget to
somehow escape the pain
his appearance brings back
memories of the damage that I had
done
He says he still loves me time had
healed all wounds
and without me hes alone

I still love him I didnt realize it until
those words he said
I should of I could of I would of oh why
now say those words in my head

Someday Someway Somehow
my trangressions will be rectified

For the rest of my life I will love him endlessly
because I never thought I was good enough
but he was one of the ones who did
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The One Who Did

Contributed by BRONZEN on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 07:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Crazy running here and there
all night long my heart aches
no one to care

He came back to me
I dont know what to do
why would he want me back
with all the changes I put him
through

He wanted us to try our love
again hey that was a U Turn
I stomped on his heart one day
and all his trust in me I surely
burned

I didnt feel I was good enough
for him I took a back seat to
being monogamous
I thought if it was cool I would
play both sides of the fence

Im sitting here for a moment
my regrets are overwhelming me
its been so long since Ive seen him
if decide to give us another shot
where do we go from here

Its running through my head those
words Im so sorry
I cried them over and over again

That day I wanted to forget to
somehow escape the pain
his appearance brings back
memories of the damage that I had
done
He says he still loves me time had
healed all wounds
and without me hes alone

I still love him I didnt realize it until
those words he said
I should of I could of I would of oh why
now say those words in my head

Someday Someway Somehow
my trangressions will be rectified

For the rest of my life I will love him endlessly
because I never thought I was good enough
but he was one of the ones who did

Copyright © BRONZEN ... [ 2006-06-14 19:57:49]
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Re: The One Who Did (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:10:59 PM AEST
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fiction or not..there's much more to be said by your words here -
Love comes once and when it does, you better grab it fast.. who knows how long it will last. I've been on boths ends of the spectrum, and have found little solace in either outcome.

Good work~

B.

Re: The One Who Did (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:25:21 PM AEST
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thank you hon your so kind

Re: The One Who Did (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 12:27:13 AM AEST
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Yes, although you say it is fiction.... this is exactly what I'm going through. I very much enjoyed it!

Re: The One Who Did (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 02:23:34 AM AEST
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This poem is saturated with true emotion and
sincerity. u keep writting i'll keep reading.

Ben

Re: The One Who Did (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 07:18:25 AM AEST
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Very heartfelt and full of raw emotions. The kind of write that brings back flutters of memory as surely many of us have experienced similar feelings.
The power of love touches us all. Well done.

Merry

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