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Sadistic static breaking in between every message you could ever send
Seems you've lost your tower and lost the power to predict what happens next
You turn to malitious intent and now you're bent on taking baby steps
What do you need to secure or maybe you'd rather blur the boundaries between you and I
The line has been blown in every possible direction and crying as you fetch them before you die
I wish I has some options or some plan to stop them as my turn always comes when it's far too late
Wishing is just for suckers, snap a picture when you stare as she puckers up to something to which she could never relate

Its me
I said its me
What other option could there possibly be
Everything I ever need
Watching as I bleed
My thoughts
My pleas

Don't be stupid [comments] => 3 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Exodus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Sadistic Intentions

Contributed by Exodus on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 04:42:54 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Torn apart as the beginning is slowly consumed by the end
Sadistic static breaking in between every message you could ever send
Seems you've lost your tower and lost the power to predict what happens next
You turn to malitious intent and now you're bent on taking baby steps
What do you need to secure or maybe you'd rather blur the boundaries between you and I
The line has been blown in every possible direction and crying as you fetch them before you die
I wish I has some options or some plan to stop them as my turn always comes when it's far too late
Wishing is just for suckers, snap a picture when you stare as she puckers up to something to which she could never relate

Its me
I said its me
What other option could there possibly be
Everything I ever need
Watching as I bleed
My thoughts
My pleas

Don't be stupid

Copyright © Exodus ... [ 2006-06-14 16:42:54]
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Re: Sadistic Intentions (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 06:51:10 PM AEST
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this write flowed and kind of dark but i liked it

Re: Sadistic Intentions (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:27:11 PM AEST
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the first part, was great but it was'nt until I got into the second part Its me- I said its me etc... that I really begun to like the poem.
Although the second part was smaller, I felt it was very powerful, it got my attention for sure!

Karla Marie

Re: Sadistic Intentions (User Rating: 1 )
by thesinner on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 04:24:51 AM AEST
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Very different.i liked.

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