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Array ( [sid] => 121758 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ebb and Flow [time] => 2006-06-14 11:20:10 [hometext] => I am trying to figure out, if I should try another round with my ex. I have grown up a lot since are last break-up and I want to give it go, but its all up to her. [bodytext] => Am I holding on to a fading dream
Do I want what is impossible
I love you with all my heart
I have loved you from the start
We ebb and flow like the tide
Sometimes these feelings lie
So where do I go from here
I am lost within my mind
Remembering our past times
You made me feel like I have won
And wonder what the **** is going on
Should I try or should I let go
You have told me what’s in your heart
How you don’t know what you want
I know I was a child, but have grown.
I can stand now on my own
You were my crutch for so long
And to that I held on so strong
But sent me away, and broke my heart
But now I back and wanting to make a fresh start
There is no certainty to my dream
So I am left wondering, trying to understand
Am I holding on to a shattered past
Or can we ever make us last [comments] => 2 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spyndl [notes] =>
|||Edited for profanity. - Moderator_14||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Ebb and Flow

Contributed by spyndl on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:20:10 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Am I holding on to a fading dream
Do I want what is impossible
I love you with all my heart
I have loved you from the start
We ebb and flow like the tide
Sometimes these feelings lie
So where do I go from here
I am lost within my mind
Remembering our past times
You made me feel like I have won
And wonder what the **** is going on
Should I try or should I let go
You have told me what’s in your heart
How you don’t know what you want
I know I was a child, but have grown.
I can stand now on my own
You were my crutch for so long
And to that I held on so strong
But sent me away, and broke my heart
But now I back and wanting to make a fresh start
There is no certainty to my dream
So I am left wondering, trying to understand
Am I holding on to a shattered past
Or can we ever make us last




Copyright © spyndl ... [ 2006-06-14 11:20:10]
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Re: Ebb and Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:52:09 AM AEST
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I feel like I'm in the same situation...
It's so hard to tell with these things.
Nice write.
~Urs


Re: Ebb and Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 07:04:23 PM AEST
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i'm older so no one take offense i never hooked backed up with anyone i once dealt with but on the other hand i f you feel in your soul it can be right this time then make a go at it




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