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Array ( [sid] => 121737 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => gave it all away just to know [time] => 2006-06-13 22:30:25 [hometext] => *my deepest thoughts* [bodytext] => i dont know why im feeling like this.
im hurting emotionaly,
and my stomach is upset.
everything feels wrong.
the world is crashing down around me,
or maybe im just breaking down.
there is a lump in my throat,
but my eyes are dry.
its nice to close my eyes and see nothing but black.
too bad my heart is beating hard in my chest,
and i can feel it more than anything.
i dont know my future and i hate not knowing.
sometimes i wish i couldn't feel.
why do i exist?
besides what use is it to have a broken mind,
with a body full of lust and a soul full of fear.
and i cant even start to believe
that there is something more out there than
life. death. and all the inbetweens.
love is infatuation.
and hurt is forever.
the devils on our shoulders.
it lives with us.
god is in our faith,
but sometimes we dont belive.
and in doupt temptations are real.
sinful thoughts. sinful actions.
guilt and regret are my hell.
i gave you my heart.
and im lost.
i guess i forgot to copy and paste
i wish i would have kept me to myself
cuz i dont have nothing left
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gave it all away just to know

Contributed by hearts4pain on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 10:30:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i dont know why im feeling like this.
im hurting emotionaly,
and my stomach is upset.
everything feels wrong.
the world is crashing down around me,
or maybe im just breaking down.
there is a lump in my throat,
but my eyes are dry.
its nice to close my eyes and see nothing but black.
too bad my heart is beating hard in my chest,
and i can feel it more than anything.
i dont know my future and i hate not knowing.
sometimes i wish i couldn't feel.
why do i exist?
besides what use is it to have a broken mind,
with a body full of lust and a soul full of fear.
and i cant even start to believe
that there is something more out there than
life. death. and all the inbetweens.
love is infatuation.
and hurt is forever.
the devils on our shoulders.
it lives with us.
god is in our faith,
but sometimes we dont belive.
and in doupt temptations are real.
sinful thoughts. sinful actions.
guilt and regret are my hell.
i gave you my heart.
and im lost.
i guess i forgot to copy and paste
i wish i would have kept me to myself
cuz i dont have nothing left

Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2006-06-13 22:30:25]
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Re: gave it all away just to know (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 10:33:38 PM AEST
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awesome write...nicely done!

wiz

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