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Array ( [sid] => 121704 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Rose [time] => 2006-06-13 06:53:33 [hometext] => I hope you guys like this, it is my first piece of work to be submitted here. Um... This is a piece I made up for my ex after we broke up. Enjoy =) [bodytext] => Will this rose wither and fade away?
Or will it go on and live another day?
Its stem is weak from all the stress.
Its petals far away from looking its best.

The heavy emotions it feels inside
The pain that it shows cannot be denied.
Tired of life, of stormy days
On the windowsill of loneliness it lies.

Hoping, dreaming and waiting for the day,
That its heart stops aching and withering away.
Waiting for the day that it will rain,
The countless drops of love in vain.

For this rose I purely hope, it’s not too late,
To once again rise above heaven's gates.
A fallen flower from the skies above,
I wish, I hope, I pray for love.
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The Rose

Contributed by Reverence on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:53:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Will this rose wither and fade away?
Or will it go on and live another day?
Its stem is weak from all the stress.
Its petals far away from looking its best.

The heavy emotions it feels inside
The pain that it shows cannot be denied.
Tired of life, of stormy days
On the windowsill of loneliness it lies.

Hoping, dreaming and waiting for the day,
That its heart stops aching and withering away.
Waiting for the day that it will rain,
The countless drops of love in vain.

For this rose I purely hope, it’s not too late,
To once again rise above heaven's gates.
A fallen flower from the skies above,
I wish, I hope, I pray for love.

Copyright Â© Reverence ... [ 2006-06-13 06:53:33]
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Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by brooken_22 on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 11:13:49 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. Shows your emotion towards the reelationship. bravo!

brooken_22

Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 11:35:19 AM AEST
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awww this is very good. You expressed your feelings well. Nice Piece

Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by caz241182 on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 11:47:21 AM AEST
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man this is a grate poem keep up the gd work hun ill recomend u to all of my friends

Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by wolf_tamer on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 03:16:38 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem. show's many emotions, and you put them out wonderfully. good job.

Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 04:29:19 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Reverence. Fantastic first post. From the wisdom of hindsight of two ex marriages, I read into your poem when conditions of love manifest ex, the unconditional love remains and, from strength of the latter, wish well the butterfly we set free ... to permit roses to grow.

Sincerely enjoyed your work. Look forward to seeing more here at YPDC.

wabl
KenMoore
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Re: The Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 12:45:10 AM AEST
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First of all welcome to YPDC, and wow what an amazing job you show so much emotion its fantastic. Looking forward in reading more of your work.
Best wishes,
~*Bluestars*~

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