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are scary
eerie sensations got me buggin'
I'm hearing things
but
I see nothin'.....
Footsteps echo
I start to tremble
voices are whispering
something is
tap tappin at he window.

In the reflection of the lightning
I see something frightening
I'm so scared
I can not move
I can only moan
and as the room goes dark
I shake and shiver
as I see red eyes glow.

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The Haunting

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:16:09 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Shadows
are scary
eerie sensations got me buggin'
I'm hearing things
but
I see nothin'.....
Footsteps echo
I start to tremble
voices are whispering
something is
tap tappin at he window.

In the reflection of the lightning
I see something frightening
I'm so scared
I can not move
I can only moan
and as the room goes dark
I shake and shiver
as I see red eyes glow.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-06-13 00:16:09]
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Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:27:37 AM AEST
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Did they get any on ya?
What eva ya do don't let um spit fire in your eyes.
huggs,
emy

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:27:55 AM AEST
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Well done, you must be the type of person that likes to tell ghost stories around the camp fire. LOL

sadaddy

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:00:58 AM AEST
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I love ghostly tales, must put my version on here sometime. I am very impressed by your words. You show the fear to me. Sue x

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by a7x36 on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:10:46 AM AEST
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this was average until the last line, that made it eerie

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:15:01 AM AEST
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lol he he i like this

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by lostsubconscience on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 02:21:35 AM AEST
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I like the stuff that will keep you guessing and lets your mind create what will happen next..nice use of words

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:37:38 AM AEST
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awesome write...nicely done!!

wiz

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 05:11:52 PM AEST
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Captivating in short rabbit punches of mysterious thought lines permitting brevity to bellow "red eyes glow". Another enjoyment in my day! Tip o' m' hat compliments to ya.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: The Haunting (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:07:51 AM AEST
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There's a certain vagueness to this that makes it even that more appealing. I like the way you left the topic open, and didn't feel the need to expand on the subject...You gave the reader just enough, and left the rest up to their minds...Nice!

Scorp.

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